All Comments on 'The Things Inside Our Hearts'

Love flourishes in times that test our mettle -- and it cares not for the battles we must fight. Well done, Scheh! ~Imp

Well, for here anyway. And that title is gorgeous. Good work.

I totally loved it. Its one of the best I have ever read and it almost made me cry. You are one of my two favorite writers in Literotica. I LOVED IT AND I CANT STOP SAYING THIS BECAUSE IT WAS THIS GREAT.

That story was just amazing, I have never read an erotic story with such an ending as yours, but it worked out very well. I usually don't go for the longer stories, but I took a chance on this one, and I'm very glad I did. Please keep writing! =)

beautiful storry but i have too admit that ther escaped some tears from my eyes when carry gets the news that nell is dead i love stories like this one with a storry and stil a beautiful lovescen keep on the writing hugs sophie

this was a beautifully written story, and I'm honored to say that the depth of detail I noted in carrie's loss of her love sent me into a fit of tears. impeccable, dear friend.

This was a pretty amazing story to read,and I'm thankful I stumbled upon it. What really hit me most though, was the line "Who are we when we cannot say the things inside our hearts?" Because it's two hours later and the question is still echoing inside my head. Thank you!

NELL CANT BE DEAD!!!!!!! what about the LOVE they shared! Pt 2 pls