All Comments on 'The Thirteenth Virgin'

Very nice beginning, great writing style! Nice title! It's all my fault that I got too scared. I had to stop reading halfway because it was too violent. I'm a softie and I get upset when people are hurt. I admire your work anyway and wish you good luck! You're a really good writer!!!!!!

This is a really cute story.

thought it was well written but agree that it should have had an epilogue or something

It's a nice read. I found some parts humorous. I also think you should have put months later or epilogue before the last paragraph.Good job.thanks for sharing.