All Comments on 'The Three Day Pass Ch. 02'

Again wonderful. Still sorry that you and I (Joanne) did not wind up together, in the story. Well maybe there is still hope.

I am a heterosexual female, but I REALLY enjoyed your story, mainly because it reminded me so much of my relationship with my own lover, so loving and equal. He also loves to fuck me in the ass, and while it took him a while to persuade me and this hasn't quite worked yet, we are gradually working it out, in ways that bring me much pleasure. Also, I would have to admit that the thought of two appealing men making love to each other turns me on terrifically! (My lover doesn't share my interest, unfortunately, but that's ok, he's quite perverted enough to satisfy me!)

The flow was right, though the dialogue was a bit artificial. People don't usually talk in consistant full sentences. Still, a nice romance. Thanks! Looking forwards to part 3.