by litpervgrrl
Very sweet, innocent, and erotic, with an opening for the other story. Get back to work, my dear ... you have more work to do, and I just know it will be a great story.
Nice story about characters that aren't the type that dominate this site. I much prefer reading about people that seem real instead of the Lit stereotypes. Well done.
Just a great story idea that is well written. Original idea with real people. Liked the touch with the brother at the end. Could we see a redux from the brother's point of view and a continuation?
You are just plain, flat-out my favorite writer on this site. I'm really glad I discovered your stories. Made for fun reading on a few days away from work for me.