All Comments on 'The Toyboy Experiment'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More!

Very well written & I love the spin. More please.

Joshua65Joshua65about 10 years ago

I really like where this is going. I hope it continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
So hot!

More please - don't leave us hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
excellent start

hope you continue this too. It is a great pair of characters. There is a lot of potential for fun and sex and maybe even something longer term than they expect? The bdsm aspect seems to be what I have come to understand as a true relationship that is not about humiliation persay, unless they enjoy that kinda thing, but also about the dominant caring for their sub. Keep it going!

ballznall60ballznall60about 10 years ago
Great writing and an excellent read!

Eagerly awaiting the continuation of this. Your buildup was superb and the transformation from straight to gay was so natural it reminded me of my younger days! Please keep it going.

miked9753miked9753about 10 years ago
Very well done

I loved it from beginning to end. I like the character development, the ambivalence leading to acceptance and the sensuous dominance. I am looking forward to new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
panting for more...

this is wonderfully erotic. sensual in detail and rich for the imagination of the reader. i love this story. please continue... it has left me completely aroused and wanting for more. i would love to be the toyboy!

thank you for this piece =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I wish i were Alex. Please continue this great story

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 10 years ago
Very erotic!

This is high-quality writing, way beyond the usual fare. My compliments!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

don't you k now any other words than 'said'? it's always 'he said'... gets annyoing after a while

denrondenronalmost 9 years ago
Hot, Sexy Story

I love his story of sensual seduction. So Sexy. I would love for a man to come on to me like that. I would love for a man to dominate me and initiate me and make me his.

FestofishFestofishover 8 years ago
Hot

This was so hot. I'm heading for part two right now with my cock in my hands!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh really?

Generally well written, although you could pay more attention to proofing your stories before posting them. If you decide to continue the series it will be interesting to see how you develop it.

However, I want to raise one concern with you about this story: it's a small one, but it's not unimportant. Yeah, Okay, so this is Lit. and it's not like we are talking about real life; but you specifically chose to include references to the couple's supposed freedom from infection:

'"You're normally heterosexual?" [John] said.

"Until now, only."

"Ever shared a needle?"

"Never injected drugs."

"Ever had a blood transfusion?"

"No."

"Good enough for me," he smiled."'

Let's stop right there. You rightly refer to blood-to-blood contact as a possible means of viral transmission, but the tacit suggestion that heterosexuality somehow provides its practitioners with an all-round protection cover against sexually transmitted diseases is sheer folly. Alex's previous random encounters could potentially have exposed him to any number of nasties (to take one example among many, you are aware that you can contract HIV through straight sex, right?); and unlike John, he apparently has absolutely no idea of the current status of his health.

Now, barebacking someone you have just met may work well enough in fiction, but the bottom line (if you'll pardon the expression) is that if you're going to have unprotected sex - gay or straight - with multiple partners, then you are going to put yourself, and them, at risk. Use a condom until you and they have the information you need, and until you are both sure of the person you are having sex with. Playing Russian roulette with your health is not a good idea. Seriously. Alex's heterosexual past may have been "good enough" for John, but if he were really that concerned about potential infection, he would have used a condom for their first encounter and then invited Alex to get himself tested. And to my mind, at least, it wouldn't have hurt the storyline if they had.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
lovey story

yes I am a older man girly boy it happen one day I need a ride to home so he gave me a ride we got talking and soon he ask if I had any plan for to day I said no sir well if you like I just live down the road here how about coming over for coffee I said yes why not I have no were to go to day well as he pull into the drive way it was a big place once we were inside the house I saw a hot tub and then he show me the kitchen what a mess he said my house keep quit and I not have time to clean up then he look for a clean cup he did not find any so I saw some in the sink I said here let me wash some cups out as he saw me wash his dishes he tank me while I was doing the dishes he told me he be back I finish the dishes and he came back wearing a black robe I got him a cup of coffee and hand it to him he said how would you like to go in the hot tub I told him I have no trunk well you do not have to wear any if you want or I can find you some thing to wear I said yes that would be nice I will wear any thing just then he hand me a girl suit the bottom its all I have so I put them on and they felt nice we toke are coffee out to the hot tub I got in and he remove his robe that when I saw his big hard cock I sat down and he sat a cross from me the water was nice and hot and I lay back a bit he said here let me put some sun cream on you as he start to rub the cream on me first my back and then he was rubbing my chest and he rub my male breasts it felt nice I do knot know why but when he stand up his cock was at my face and I touch it when I did he pinch my nipples and I jerk his cock a bit then he stop and move a bit close now my lips were touching his cock I open my mouth and he shove his cock in as I suck his cock he said that feel nice in a while he pull out he said sand up and I did as told he told me you look nice in them it show off you ass then he put his hand on my ass he said lets get out and go in the house I said yes then we went to his bedroom and I dry off and remove the girl bathing suit as I bend over to pick it up I felt his hand on my ass again so this time I just move my legs open a bit he toke the towel and dry my ass for me after he dry me off I just lay on the bed with my feet on the rug he walk over to a table and got some cream he told me this will help a bit as he rub it on his finger poke its way into my ass hole I lift my ass so he can get it in more he pull out and got behind me then I felt him shove his cock in me as he shrew me soon he came inside me we then had a show together he wash me all over with this cream once I was done and all wash off I got out and he dry me off this time he just smile at me and said did you like the bathing suit you had on early I said yes sir would you like to wear girl panties I thought about were this was going I said if you want me too he said yes he got me a pair of red thong panties well then he said look its late well not stray the night and in the morning I take you home if you want or stray for the week end I told I had no clean clothes with me he said you can wear some clothes here I have I said as a joke what girly clothes he just laugh well you are in girl panties now I said yes that I am it just us two here so if you are dress as a girl I said fine then what kind of other girl clothes have you just then he show me a black dress and white blouse I put it on and that week end I was his maid and at night I wore a short nightie the last night I was in his bed he was a sleep and on his back I got up to go to the bath room when I came back I pull the cover back to get in and I saw his hard cock it look nice and hard I bend over and put my lips around it as I suck his cock he woke up that my girl you know how to please a man then I stop and got on top of him and he put his cock at my ass hole then I lower on to his cock I move up and down while I did this his hand were on my breasts he told me if your breasts were a bit bigger I could suck them I said yes but there not just then he came in my ass then we lay in bed for awhile after I got up and shower I got dress I found a bra and panties put them on and then a dress were you could see my bra a bit he came out after awhile he look at me walk over and kiss my neck I put my hand on his head and said that nice dear you know how to make a girl feel he said you like this yes while now you are my girly bitch now after a year I have girly breasts soon they will be big but for now I happy with them

FlexibilityFlexibilityalmost 8 years ago
Delicious!

What a sexy story! A fantasy of mine since puberty, I've experienced being seduced by an experienced man and by an experienced woman and the moment you surrender is as exquisite as described here. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved it

I am sooooo jealous.

I want that experience, have wanted it for years. My late wife, whom l told this to, fucked me a couple of times but it was both painful and not the same as a man fucking me.

I am now over 70 and too old and too late totru this. In a way l am glad for had l tried this an my youth l am pretty sure l would have lived as a gay man ....l did suck my friends cock many times and he mine, but when l got married l stopped as it would not be fair on my wife.

But l still masturbate to the memory of his big thick beautiful cock

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So erotic

I loved the story, largely because I enjoy teaching younger, inexperienced guys about the pleasure of sex with another man. I can't honestly say that I've ever been with a complete cock-virgin, but a few who had rarely experienced being with a man. I can see something of myself in the top here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

Not even sure if you are still writing or have any interest. However, if you ever take up the pen again, it would be dearly appreciated if you continued and finished this wonderful, sexy and exciting story you started. This is probably one of the hottest and best written stories on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very hot.

A wonderful arousing story about I how I would submit, thank you. Please write more.

Csucker64Csucker64about 5 years ago
Excellent

I found it highly erotic and very tender - more please

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 5 years ago
A wonderful story.

While you describe wonderful sex scenes that are arousing, I find myself intrigued by the developing of interest and of relationship that you describe. It's verrrry attractive. The main character is discovering more through the exercise of opening his mind (and other bits) to things he'd not considered, or at least from a different perspective. John is much more secure in his place in the world, more sure of himself, so it's a good contrast. Both are respectful of themselves and other as they feel each other out (figuratively and literally) and define their roles in the relationship. I enjoy that regardless the inclinations.

Anyway, I've gone long-winded in my comment. I really enjoy this series. Thanks for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sounds familiar

When I was 19 years old I was housesitting my aunts condo and I was spend my day working on my tan. One day I conversed with a man named Bob whom I was told was gay by my aunt.We had a pleasant conversation is around noon if I wanted a sandwich and I followed him to his condo. He suggested that we use both of the showers to wash the oil off of us before we sat down for lunch. After I showered I dried off and put my swim trunks back on, but he came out naked with his nice cut 5 inch flaccid cock swinging in front of him. He walked into his bedroom and put on some new swim trunks actually some tight black speedos. He commented that he liked my tan and asked if it was all over I said yes and showed him part of my bare ass. I was bisexual at the time, actually curious, It was still daring on my part. He said he was also town all over and I said yes I have seen him nude. He asked if I liked what I saw and I complimented him on his physique for a man of his age. After we eat lunch and a couple of cranberry juice and vodka we sat and chatted in his living room.He asked me if I was gay curious and I said I was curious and in the military, I have never acted upon it. He said we’re not on base now and even though he was gay he was not out because I was teaching job. He asked me to stand up in front of them as as I did he pulled down my trunks and proceeded to fondle my 19-year-old bubble butt and lick my cock and balls. He asked me to lay down on the couch face first and he would give me a nice massage. The massage didn’t last very long before he had my legs open and was rimming my ass licking my taint and balls. Before I knew it I was face down with my ass in here as he licked and fingered my smooth ass hole. After he played with me for about 10 minutes I felt him rub his hard cock on me and slowly enter my formally Virgin boy pussy. We spent the rest of the afternoon fucking, sucking and showering together. He took me again in the shower left another load of cum in my ass. Even though you lost me in the shower I was still leaking his cum. After we dried off he pushed my face first on his bed open my cheeks and proceeded to lick his come out of my ass. I left an hour or so later went to bed, and woke in the morning askng if I was OK. He asked if I want more end it didn’t take me more than a minute to cross from my aunts back door to his which was 5 feet away. As I walked in he introduced me to a friend another mature man like him and they fucked me over and over all day. I probably took 4or 5 loads from each of them. We will take a break at the pool a while and then one by one we would stroll back to his condo and resume fucking. I continued meeting one or both of them for 6 months until I was transferred.

Curious64KCCurious64KCalmost 2 years ago

Great story. In my youth I never did that but as an older man now I still wish an older sexy man would “break me in”…. I’ll be reading more.

DORTMAN69DORTMAN69over 1 year ago

Très belle comme toute les 1 fois avec un homme très âgé !!!! Moi j'aie appris comment donner du plaisir à mon amant 71 ans a bien le sucer et avaler ce fut l'inauguration de ma bouche et qu'elle pouvait servir à autre chose !!!! J'aie maintenant 33 à marié mais je continue à teter depuis un peut plus de 20 ans et pense toujours avec tendresse et amour à ce viel homme !!!! D'ailleurs je ne pompe que de vieux papy et aussi des hommes noirs !!!!!!!

MichaelfantasiesMichaelfantasiesabout 2 months ago

Great story! An older guy meets a younger, straight guy... Both relaxed about lifestyles. John's suggestions would make ME curious! His kiss would make my knees weak. Despite my nervousness, I'd find myself agreeing to go on a date with him too!

John kept putting Alex at ease, even back at his place, on the couch. I almost came when I read what you wrote about John saying some guys aren't into penetrative sex, as he lowered Alex's underwear. THEN John reveals that HE loves penetrative sex! Alex knew what that meant! John had every intention to fuck Alex. That fuck scene on the couch was hot to read about too. I wish I was Alex, giving my virginity willingly to an older man!

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