All Comments on 'The Training Ch. 01'

Hopefully they won't let him out of his cage for a few years

I loved everything about this story- the subject matter, the realness of Mary and her desires- such a hot concept. Thanks for sharing and keep it coming!

hot - your story made me very wet, and when i finished reading i made myself come thinking of it.

Loved your story. I want to come over right now and have you do the lot to me, and much much more.

If you do not care for BDSM, then perhaps you should not read it and make rude comments. Of the many catagories Literotica offers, I'm sure there is one more suited to your tastes.

I liked the story very much. I thought it was very well written and I liked the content too ;)

Wow

where the following chapters?

are you gonna write his story?does this dom come back and give them couple's therapy? i think that'd be exciting for all.can hub get wife to perform as his sub now,as they both want? that ole dom sure packed plenty of lessons into one short day.at least the screening process was believable and the meeting thought out.more follow-up chapters would sure be educational.please.oh yeah,thanks.

i do not understand why people read stories that they will not like, no one makes them read the story . . . . or do they, perhaps they are being punished? Any way i loved the story, thanks for writing it. Are we going to get more about these three? If not why not?

Thanks for a great story. Loved it... gave me some good ideas too.