All Comments on 'The Transformation of Betty Ch. 14'

of the story was quite eventfull and interesting the mainproblem now is: first where you wanne go, there is nothing much left and second, in the beginning she still was kind of his wife and they could talk to each other on a equal intellect. As she is now reduced to be a 24 hour fucktoy, there is no such talk possible anymore. and believe me, (I never had something like this), but my best fuck "toy", so to say, got very boring outside fucking, as I could share nothing with her at all.

i enjoyed the hell out of this peter ...as did nancy ...supplies great ideas to others that like sex with others ...thanks for the series roadbird and nancy

And thats saying something

There is nothing loving about any of this,you are both damaged beyond repair, please just stop!

I would love to have my wife trained like this

So I don't eat eggplant. Therefore, it is not an issue to me. Yet it is interesting that so many who purport to hate your writings read them so thoroughly. Then, of course, they excoriate you ... most likely to purify their hearts of the pleasure they derived from the stories. I trust you use the wisdom and maturity that your writings reflect to deal with their idiocy. I will anxiously check in periodically in hopes of seeing a new installment. Excellent work.

I would like to see this story continue. Perhaps Allen's wife could be drawn into a similar situation.

I hope that you will have more to write. I heve enjoyed reading this series.

this shouls not be in LL. it should be in BDSM instead. the way her husband used her and gave her away did not show any love all. this was a great story but again it was in the wrong place.

Earlier she had a "cunt ring". In this chapter she has "cunt rings". Did I miss something or did the installation of additional ring(s) get skipped over?

Maybe now is the time to not only bring Allen's wife into the picture, but begin to change Betty's appearance. Maybe breast augmentation and hair color and makeup. Make the commitment to real degrading change.

Another epic piece of shit from dum_u_softly.