by KaylaG
as i always fond of romance ... dont know but this story is treating nicole as victim and brian as rapist ... last part "6 " was nice when nicole was started feeling like brian's girl ... but this part i again got disappointed .. but liked it
I originally thought that Brian was going to make her his girlfriend. But it seems as though Brian is just a sadistic user. She deserves better.
Started off so well but now Nicole gives up without any fight at all, few too many holes in this story now and I feel it's lost track of it's original route.
Love the story and hope it continues. Wish you had written about the months in between story 6 & 7.
I no longer like Brian or Nick's friends! You ruined a perfect story
Good, but not as good as the previous stories. I liked when nicole still struggled with her identity and whether or not she hated or enjoyed being this way. Get back to that and I'll be in heaven.
The story is well done and moving along at a good pace. However it might be nice to see Nick/Nicole do some soul searching as to why he would rather become Nicole than return home to his parents. Confused gender identity keeping him in place, or is there more backstory that could enlighten the readers?
Listen, I swear you are inside my head for fantasies. I've been full time for 2 years and this is laying out my kinks like a Wikipedia article. Don't let these bad comments deter you, you are heading in a perfect direction for this story and any trans woman that grew up afraid of what she was will thank you for it.
The story is pretty good and the time since the last part is troubling, I hope we get to read more.
I've really enjoyed the story, feminization stories are some of my favorites and this one also had the perfect amount of domination, enough to be effective but not enough to be creepy.
...Until part 7 anyway, I don't think involving the buddies is a good idea (hope we don't see more of them) and it may have been too much in general. I'll admit I'd prefer a bit more romance (though punishments should stay) and apparently so do many others.
So consider it, but ultimately do what you think is best for the story, and above all don't be discouraged by criticism from continuing your great story.
I love this story but I felt a bit sorry for Nicole when she had to gone her friends blow jobs I actually had to do the same thing when I broke a rule master invited all my guy friends over and told them I was a submissive slut that would love to please them
I have been loving this story............ please continue....... We need to see where she/he ends up! I love that she is growing breast!
omg ur narration gave me a hard on in my pants all through im reading n imagine how it would be reading all the parts at a time please continue n make her grow her breasts n make her a plumpy women n make her fuck the girls as a shemale hoping fr ur sooner next part..:)
Great story so far. I would like to see Nick's parents come over to visit.
Please don't stop. The story is great, however don't turn it into another guy turned shemale whore, we want to see Nicole fully feminized and happy as Brian's girl/wife.
Also can you make a chapter with Brian's point of view. Why he's doing this, why Nick and so on. That'd be great.
I was loving this story until you ruined it with the friends i mean come on no way would friends turn that cold so quickly, so don't do anymore.
Please write more these stories are great! Would love to find out what happens next!
God damn I'm so hard at the moment part of me wishes I had a roommate like that ,and another part wishes it was me getting fucked
I really hope you finish this I check everyday and nothing please please please continue this story
what would it take for you to finish this story. It is perfect and we are so heavily invested!
This is the best forced fem story on the net. Please continue with it
It's getting close to a year with no up date I love all these stories but this is the frustrating part never knowing how it will end really sucks hope it gets finished
As I read this story I dream of me being Nicole. What I would'nt give to be her and have my Brian fucking me and then giving me to our friends.
This is a great story! I look forward to more from you. Thanks for sharing.
That was absolutely my favorite sissy story Ive ever read. Im a sissy myself and wish that could happen to me!
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One of the best stories I've read since I discovered this site. Poor Nicole, I can only imagine what's in store for her now. Great reading. I had to read the last two chapters twice.
I guess the author is done with this series, for whatever reason. It was very enjoyable though, with some nice scenarios. The piercings and tattoo were nice touches.
i can’t wait for the next chapter, not ashamed to admit i’ve been hard since chapter 1
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This story is incredibly HOT! This scenario is something that scares me. A roommate making me dress as a girl, wear makeup and then make me suck his cock and become his cocksucker. And that CHASTITY! While it's hot to read, I would be very scared if a man made me wear one! And becoming His GIRL ! Having him take my virginity! Then taking "Vitamins!!!" And the humiliation Nick must have felt when his friends saw him dressed as a girl! Not only that, but being made to suck off his friends and let them fuck her!!! This story has it ALL !!!
I admit, in a way, I would like this to happen to me, but like Nick, in the beginning, I would not be so willing. Also, I'm turned on by a guy like Brian though. I would be VERY nervous if a man wanted to do these things to me.
Loved Nicole sucking off Brian in front of his friends. Then sucking and getting fucked by her friends.
I love stories focused on gradual manipulation and someone's life slowly spiralling out of control, so of course this series is just perfect! Without doubt my favourite M/m story on this site.
manipulation life slowly one fall deeper into submissive with out controlling any part of the change.