All Comments on 'The Tutor'

by AgeofAquarius

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Stephen7RedoStephen7Redoover 13 years ago
Totally Engaging!

Love your story!

Grabbed me right from the start and had grabbed myself before I was halfway through. Very engaging story and beautiful character development. Love the romnace of it for Maggie too!

Thanks,

Stephen

ZottedZottedover 13 years ago
Well written and very hot.

Great first story, I hope you keep writing!

Welcome to Literotica.

1Browneyedguy1Browneyedguyover 13 years ago
Welcome

LOved the story! Classic !

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I hope it was as good for you as it was for me

Hey, I really enjoyed this (and gave it a 5). The thing that didn't ring true for me was the way you have him just "jumping on her" at the "study session" - it just seemed really abrupt without more of a build-up - either during that session itself, or in the months after they met.

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