All Comments on 'The Twins'

I clicked on this story because of the tag "Bisexual Female", and I find it endlessly amusing that the titular twins are (almost) named Jizzy and Lezzie.

Since it was under grandmother and lesbian incest. I was expecting grandma to be involved not just walking in after. Could use a little more build up to the sex. All in all a good first attempt and would like to read part 2, 3 etc.

too fake....should have built the tension and had sex one by one.....no girl in the right mind would suddenly have a 3 way just because she made the guy hard....expecially if it were a cousin fix this for next chapter

Wow, that was a hot story, I can not wait for the second part.