by Baxter72
Not mommies was absolutely correct. Removing a few typos (and missing words) would improve the story.
There should probably have been some kind of consequence if a bunch of boys did indeed see him fuck Kristin. Or was it just him fantasizing? If the latter that should be made a bit more clear.
don't let the other guy bother you..i hate stories where everyone gets pregnant..it was an ok effort but the sex was too short w/too little description
All 4 of these little vixens should have been made into "mommies", since you were fucking them at 18 years old or so. The "Pill" ruined this story.