All Comments on 'The Two Summers of the Four Sisters'

by Baxter72

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not mommies was absolutely correct. Removing a few typos (and missing words) would improve the story.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 6 years ago

There should probably have been some kind of consequence if a bunch of boys did indeed see him fuck Kristin. Or was it just him fantasizing? If the latter that should be made a bit more clear.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad

don't let the other guy bother you..i hate stories where everyone gets pregnant..it was an ok effort but the sex was too short w/too little description

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Bull Crap!--Disgusting!

All 4 of these little vixens should have been made into "mommies", since you were fucking them at 18 years old or so. The "Pill" ruined this story.

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