All Comments on 'The Ugly Duckling'

Thanks for this beautiful story, I really liked it. I do believe there is someone special out there for everyone. Thanks again.

I liked the supportive family (Harry and Alice). Interesting that Anna sought out somebody with a personality very much like her parents; good that she ended up making a good decision.

We should all be so lucky to have a sister like Alice.

Boyd

I agree with everyone else about the story being great except for the fact that I felt you abruptly ended it a bit too early. Mayeven just a couple of more about when he gets back, meet the parents and the wedding. But either way still a great read and very nice work on the whole. Keep it up.

i loved it!! thank you soo much! it cheered me up to read this!! wonderfully written!! =)

It is well-developed short story. Not really an erotic story.

A nice story if a bit drawn out and rambling.

IF ONLY WE COULD FIND LOVE LIKE THAT......

loved the way the story unfolded...no rush...no wild sex just gentle and loving.....people like this really do exist .......loved it from start to finish......when they finally made love it was so tender and so romantic......

I've been reading all of your stories and I have to say that this one is one of my favorite!! It was written so well!! There is so much truth in how people treat each other and the learning of sex and a older virgin!!! Very well done!!! Keep it up!!!!