All Comments on 'The Underworld Ch. 02'

Didn't think you were going to continue with this. Pleased that you have though, as it has potential to be a really great story. But, you need to submit chapters more often, so that the story will flow more naturally. If possible the chapters could do with being longer also. Anyways, I liked this chapter and am eagerly awaiting for chapter 3. :)

Please continue this story! thanks