by Naughtily_Written
Nothing against your story but I hate reading about those stories where the best friend loves their best friend and refuse to tell them when they have the opportunity to do so. I know they don't want to humiliate themselves or risk the friendship but if they are best buds then they should be able to talk about the situation and move on instead of suffering seeing the person being with others.
Your story is so well written I can't help but lick my lips in anticipation for more. I've been known to read and write a few best friend stories myself so I should know
You do a first person story really well. I see the entire monologue from her viewpoint. Please don't rush the chapters to follow. Have fun teasing us with the whole romance.
especially if two choose to live as a couple and do they extend to personal preferences, TK U MLJ LV NV
This is one of the best one's I've read in a long time. Please write more !!