All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 03'

loved it ever sec..

In Chapter 3, part 2, Diane mentions her car. But previously, she mentioned having no vehicle, so Devon had to give her money for transportation. Keep your story straight, but otherwise, moving along nicely!

1: You refer to Mistress Rebecca as Roberta early on in this chapter, and then switch back to Rebecca.

2. Thoroughly enjoying the story so far. Can't wait to read more. :)

Wow.....this is amazing !!!!