All Comments on 'The Video Shoot Ch. 04'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 10 years ago
She's a rainbow !

Comes in colors everywhere. The narrator really isn't meant for her. She's a trailblazer , he's a follower. Very well told- I love that her character is still unfolding as sex goes on. Usually authors fosake one for the other. I thank Tsquare foe sharing these two and their world.

Nick_ANick_Aover 10 years ago
Awesome!

Loving the slow emotional development combined with the hot setting!! Please keep adding more chapters.

CassieK, ill be your brother ;)

CassieKCassieKover 10 years ago
Why can't I have a brother like John?

Read all 4 chapters and enjoyed them sooo much.

Please don't stop writing, I love the way you leave so much for my imagination and don't paint a picture that's over the top. ( ie. You don't mention 12" cocks, or huge breasts.) Your story allows me to imagine myself in the picture.

This series of chapters are amongst the best story I have read.

Please don't stop writing. Pretty please 😈😈😈.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Looks like you've reposted Ch. 03, here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

Came several times with this story! More please !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

Great story

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