All Comments on 'The Wall'

wow... i loved this story... did u make it up or did it rle happen? i'm really impressed w/ this story... u should write a sequal... (this story gave me a couple of ideas also)

Loved your retelling of the experience...

well written...

and SO FUCKING HOT

VERY hot story Jenn!

Can't believe I've lived such a sheltered life. Never in my wildest forays into open sexuality would that kind of scenario ever happen. You've lived my ultimate fantasy life.

Please continue writing!

Another goodie, Jenno. One of the things I like about this, and all, your stories is that they're just packed with sex, sex, sex. I really liked the hole in the plastic wall that started the whole thing--quite believable. But the sudden, out of the blue girl-girl action, while stimulating, was not. Neither was all the stange men joining in the guys' fun. Had you used the device of foreshadowing, these events would have been credible. Nice, tender, loving girl-girl scene made for a great ending.

<p>Jenn,</p>

<p>This is another terrific story. You set it up well, developed the heat slowly, and then pushed your readers over the top, right along with your characters. I liked all of the people in your story, and wish that I could have been there to see it happen.</p>

<p>I'm of the opinion that this story was very believable, especially now that I've spent some time reading your contributions in the boards, where you confirm that your tales are true. I disagree with the poster who complained that you failed to set-up the girl/girl action, and the guys who invited themselves into your game. Life is full of surprises, and there are many effective ways to tell a story.</p>

<p>Some surprises, such as the ones you set up in this story, can pack a heavy erotic punch. These elements catch the reader off-guard, being surprises and all, and have a tendency to push one over the edge, so to speak. An alternative to "foreshadowing" is to jolt the reader with the unexpected, let it do its work, and then explain it all later: just like you did in this fine story.</p>

<p>Thanks for doing such a nice job of sharing your wild, erotic life with us.</p>

<p>Please, keep 'em coming.</p>

<p>Snow Snake</p>

Incredible! I now have to go take a cold shower.

Reluctant Texan

Long day at the office. Enjoying some Literotica and read this story that I had read oh so many months ago yet it is as good as it was the first time. To have experienced "The Wall" is an ultimate fantasy whether joining the guys on their side or watching the women in their enjoyment. Thank you for sharing a well-written, tantalizing story. Each of your stories are written as though they were actually experiences. Please don't ruin this perception by telling me they are figments of your imagination. Because my imagination runs wild with the thought of these stories actually happening and you experiencing all. Thank you. Please write more.

Jen, you're probably long gone but I just wanted to say how much I loved this story :)

I love the unexpected! And gangbang -> love story I didn't see coming!

Also the picture in your profile...wow. Probably one of the top ten sexiest pictures I've seen. Other ppl might not agree but there is something unashamed and proud about it, oh and that ass ;)

Another awesome Jennventure. Your stories are very sexy and there's not a bad one in the bunch. I liked this one quite a bit and wish you were still around to share your sexy adventures with your readers. Well done and thanks for putting this out there for all to read. Inspiring stuff.

Great writing, great imagination. We are HH and WW (hard & horny and wet & wanting). We haven't been to a club in years but are ready to call old friends and duplicate this scenario.

I read this years ago and read it again every once in a while. Such an excellent scenario, seems very real.

I don't have many favorite stories on this site, but this will always be one of them. Fantastic!

One of the best stories I have read, it sounds real. Was it?

Boy I'm glad I found your stories, working through in date order and they've all been great.

A wild night followed by a beautiful morning, Rachel is gorgeous!

Saw your profile picture earlier and it's wonderful.

Sexy story and well written.

Do I take a number?

Give mine?

Asking for MySelf! :+))))

Very good writing!

Brilliant! Sublime ... The ending sequence was perfect! That's when my cock exploded.

Thank you very much!

Great hot story, I loved the women parts! Out of control #1: In college, my best friend going down on me delivering a hip bucking orgasm and then me sucking on a clit for the first time, OMG, trying to give her an orgasm. Out of control; #2: Twenty years later at a Christmas party, I'm upstairs with a black guy I just met, he's fingering my pussy and I'm stroking my first black cock when the hostess walked in, she gave me a knowing wink.