All Comments on 'The Wand'

by Morrigu

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vibesvibesabout 15 years ago
hey

So accurately exciting ... thanks!

JammyJimmyJammyJimmyabout 15 years ago
Very Hot!

Loved the parallels of physical and emotional at the start, how the memories triggered a 'twin' arousal of both. It all seemed very natural, very intimate, perhaps because of the personal nature of her thoughts.

A very simple story, kept short and sweet, that immediately seemed real.

Good work, Morri - really impressed!

JJ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
mmm!

almost poetic, so sensitive and erotic...

fire_breezefire_breezeabout 15 years ago
Beautiful

Just simply beautiful. Thank you.

MrFantasyManMrFantasyManabout 15 years ago
Splendid Imagery...

This piece is simplistic in it's beauty...yet every word evokes an image...the artist paints with a brush as this one paints with words...evocative and touching. The beauty and passion flow effortlessly...the wand is but a device the emotion the engineer...postively beautiful.

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