All Comments on 'The Warriors Reward'

by BarbaricIntent

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keairankeairanalmost 16 years ago
Excellent Start

I honestly hope you continue this story-line. The sex seemed appropriate for how it happened, and would love to see sequels, as well as a prequel about the exarch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You have got my attention!

Really enjoyed this well written story, I thought the storyline is quite original and would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very good start

Great start! Intriguing premise with characters and a universe full of possibilities. Can't wait to read more. Keep writing, please. Cheers, Ange

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
needs work

Need to work on your grammar and spelling... Draft in a word processor and then spell and grammar check it. Then submit the final version. Will make for a better read and presents you as a more professional writer.

WerewolfatNightWerewolfatNightalmost 16 years ago
Moving you to my favorites, dude.

As soon as I remember how to do that, that is...

You write consistently excellent stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Intriguing

This story warrants more chapters. The plot is pure space opera with much promise of more action - both personal and overall story line. I liked it a lot.

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