by Antonio_y_Cleopatra
Wow you are very good at your craft, loved the story and the characters. More couldn't hurt. What a great series.THANKYOU
This has got to be 1 of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Great writing and I REALLY hope to see more stories posted by you.
Loved where you took it, and the languid, romantic pace you used to get there.
The over-the-top, retarded, animalistic sounds they made whenever they had an orgasm was a turn-off, but everything else was fairly enjoyable.
Well, I'm a slow reader, but I finally made it thru or should I say, what a pity that I reached the end. This is such a fabulous story. I really loved it and have admit, that I got jealous, somtimes, regarding to the hot passionate sex and the love. The emotional moments in the story made it hard to read, sometimes, because it made my eyes water a bit. ;-)
Thank you
Really enjoyed reading your work. The unique perspective works well. Keep on writing.
I cannot say a bad word about that entire 8 part read. I have been reading non-stop, as I haven't been able to put it down. Such a fantastic story, I loved every minute of it. Much love to the author.
I have to admit that I read this story in one big gulp, anxious to see what would happen next. I loved getting to know the characters. I would be interested to know where Cathy's exhibitionism might lead her ( and Brad).
Sounds like a lot of EMDR! Well done, excellent read. Looking forward to more!