All Comments on 'The Wedding and Hilary'

Mustard is the yellow stuff you put on hotdogs, muster is the proper word. Other mistakes and some grammar work would make this a little better.

So did she get preggie her first time around? Maybe your flower girl at your wedding could be your toddler daughter?

Cute story.

Choose your words more carefully please. Mustard is not the same as mustered and seen should have been saw. use a thesaurus or a dictionary.

Why the fuck is this girl wearing a WHITE dress here? That's reserved for the bride. Have you ever been to an actual wedding?