All Comments on 'The Wedding Planner Ch. 10'

for me. I'm outta here!

The stories gotta wrap up soon. I see some stories on this site go on for 20... 30 chapters? That's way too long. You're losing your readers dude. I'll be there for 2 or 3 more chapters max. Hope you wrap it up by then, if not, I'm sorry but it's getting tedious and boring now...

Thanks for writing Bob, I know some people hate your stuff but I like most of it.

Your story line is excellent. I really enjoy it and can't wait to see more. Don't listen to those haters because they can't keep up. Write as long as you feel into it. I hope that after you bring Fran and Jake to a climax regarding their marriage, you'll keep writing abour Fran's exploits. Can't wait for the next installment.

Is this really all there is to Jake and Fran? After the first 2 chapters, I've been scanning instead of reading because it's the same thing chapter after chapter. I guess if that's your purpose, then you've succeeded. You may lose some followers, not that it matters.

At third chapter I read the last lines, same for the fourth and fifth, now I just check to see if there is (continued).

These chapters keep repeating the same thing over and over. Is there a point?