All Comments on 'The Weekend Sleepover Ch. 01'

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There are only 2 dudes in this story, right? Mark and the narrator, Kevin. So, why does Mark, brother to Jenny, suddenly become Matt, in the last paragraph?

This has long been one of my favorite repeat reads on Lit. Cheers to one excellent story!

And you did it without foot long penises and DDD babes! Wish more authors showed that kind of judgment.

This is a marvelous sexy story, told exactly as it happened??

The pace, dialogue and thoughts were perfect.

Must have more of this.

You are a real literary astist.

Great so far, hoping to read more and he gets Jenny too.

And I would love to read about Mark too !

But apparently Mark had a name-change operation on page two (or did someone named Matt join unannounced?).

I hope there is more to come