All Comments on 'The Weekend Sleepover Ch. 03'
by spaldan
- 25 Comments
BookPimpabout 12 years agoGreat story. Would love to read more, but they way it ended was very good. I can not wait until you come out with future stories and new characters.
nubisabout 12 years agoHope you use the characters in more stories..would love to here about how things develope.
thameronabout 12 years agocant wait for more stories from spaldan. amazing stories and im really liking this series!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoReally, really good series. Very nice characters, scenes and overall writing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
pindrop80about 12 years agoWow, this series was great. A little romance, some realistic relationship development, a lot of sex, some dedicated pussy eating (which is seriously lacking in most stories). Please keep writing!
one3nine0almost 12 years agoit'd be nice if there was some kind of final chapter or epilogue to it all. i mean we can guess what will happen, but it'd be nice to finish it off. other than that, i loved the story.
silverwing919almost 12 years agoI loved it, can you please write an epilogue or more conclusive final chapter please.
-Silver
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoA VERY IMAGINATIVE STORY, WELL THOUGHT OUT BUT A LITTLE TOO LONG AND HAVING ALL THAT SEX SUCCESSFULLY IS NOT PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLoved it but would like to see another final chapter. To the person saying its impossible, its not, it really isnt. From personal experience I can tell you that you just feel worn out, shoot empties (which hurt after a certain point), and feel raw but it is oh so very possible...
Bob925over 11 years agoGreat interesting and enjoyable read. Can I add my name to the we want further chapters please Spaldan. Perhaps a visit to the girls college, for the boys? A summer vacation together? Perhaps the introduction of elder sister Mandy into the story, or even mother (you did go to the trouble of describing them on page 1); How about adding these two people into the mix via another game of cards maybe adding a boyfriend to Mandy?... Spaldan, I am trying to tempt you here.......
Anonymousover 8 years agoI could not wait to finish, only made it through chapter -3 before I made a mess....great stuff, I get to jerk off to this story again as I continue next few chapters....hope there is a free for all fuckfest in the final chapters...
Anonymousover 7 years agoChapter 1 was teriffic, chapter 2 was good. The last chapter turns our protaganisst into an inexhaustible sexual superman and repeats the "cum on my face" scenario rather too often (not that I ever complain about that in MY life).
You are a very good writer: you juggle six characters and keep all the personalities lively and recognizably individual, but this last section could use a little more work.
ausvirgoalmost 7 years agoLoved the story.
Kevin did seem to have an unrealistic reserve of cum, but then it is fiction.
One small quibble though - how do you play a card game in the dark? That cards would be unreadable.
Anonymousover 5 years agoShould remove this sentence:
What I wouldn't give to be 18 again and have that kind of recovery power.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis superb conclusion to The Weekend Sleepover is an emotional, deeply moving drama, with excellent character development and a plot that never flags from the first sentence to the last.
