All Comments on 'The Weight of the World Ch. 01'

by mdb913

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Nice!!

Please continue with this story. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it!

Your story has a lot of elements that are rare in erotica - character development, believable shyness and awkwardness, and emotions beyond the usual shame/lust/anger/love set. Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story!

I enjoyed your story very much. As someone who has been on the "large" side all of his life, I can well identify with the main character and all of his emotional baggage. Looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long. Thanks for a great story.

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