All Comments on 'The Welcome Home'

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Fun_gentFun_gentover 13 years ago
Very Good

Very life like and realistic. I can see that so happening in every day life with every day couples! Great job! Keep it up!

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakeover 13 years ago
dessert now, before dinner

What a delicious idea!!!

And such an exciting woman.. couldn't even wait to get up the stairs.

A very hot story, so well written. I'd love to be in Walter's shoes.

dmwriterdmwriterover 13 years ago
Short but Hot

Well done...hope you have more submittals soon.

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