All Comments on 'The White Native'

by volescamper

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
um

Mango tree in a dusty mining town ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

wow this is kind of racist. . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You people choose the stupidest things to complain about!!!!!

Who cares about the mango tree in the dusty mining town????

In the whole story that's the only thing that stuck with you the mango tree?

Volescamper your story was good. I enjoyed it . Thanks for writing and posting...

Keep up the good Work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
fantastic story

I love this story. You write some of the best non-consent stories out there and this one is one of the very best ever. Please keep up the amazing work.

tae352001tae352001over 9 years ago
5 stars

excellent story hope this is a continuing saga of at least 3 parts. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome story

I think the old man should have had her take her shoes and socks of too.. total nude. what a sight down to her painted toes. wow 5 stars please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

perhaps while the teacher was in the tree you could have written Jonno easily reaching up and spreading her open and fingering her and her clit for a while.. since he was too young to copulate perhaps oral would have been perfect as a final means of repayment for her comment of him in school. great story great writer keep writing 5 star story and effort

bike4twobike4twoalmost 9 years ago

Enjoyed the story ! Would love to hear about Debbie's next visit to camp Wakkalot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Tribal Slut

She had to be totally satisfied and possibly turned into a Slut, I know I wouldn't be able to say no to the tribesmen and they could fuck me as much as they desired!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Thank you for the story. Would love to read about Debbie's next visit to the camp. Maybe Jonno has now reached the "age of copulation" and Debbie becomes his first ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Exciting story. I hope we get to hear about Debbie's next Sunday with the tribesmen. I'm sure she will end up with a well-used but well-satisfied pussy.

InnateecstacyInnateecstacyalmost 4 years ago
Liked it!

I enjoyed the story very much, but was hoping for some more action like oral sex. Maybe the sequel will have it. Overall, a good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A sequel?

Can you continue this story into a series. Really enjoyed it.

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