All Comments on 'The White Rose Crisis Ch. 02'

This story has been bothering me for a while, so glad you came back.

People forget when you take so long to get back to a story with a new chapter, so do not wait to get back to this story-line, please.

i cant wait for the next chapter. write it soon

GRR IM USING CAPS LOCK TO BITCH CAN YOU TELL HOW IMPORTANT I AM MY OPINION IS GOD IM NOT A WHINY LITTLE TROLL DUUH...

...seriously, not a bad story. little short, but meh, I can still tell you put some time in, rather than post a half-page random assortment of sexual buzz words written in 15 minutes, theres a few of those out there...so next one soon?

you NEED to add more parts to this! im loving his confused spiral into incest, don't wait so long next time pleeeease!!

p.s. would love for the cousin to be his mystery girl but don't mind who as long as it gets steamy ;)

Please give us the next chapter before another year passes. I like the tension being played out, but don't drag it on so long I forget to come back.

please don't wait another year to post the next chapter. this story is very thrilling and the suspense of finding out who it was is killing me. I have a feeling that you have another few chapters in mind to write so please get those creative juices flowing. despite it being your first time tackling this category, I must say you have outdone yourself. the story truly captures a person and enthralls them. I assume your meghan undertones suggest that eventually he will get together with her but not before having a few incestuous scares with the rest of his family.

So far, so good. I am enjoying the story. Thank you!

Keep writing really like the story line

exciting

This is quite a unique incestful whodunnit!!!8

Building nicely, now he thinks it’s Lucy, my bet is still Sarah.

5/5

Each chapter builds more of a mystery.

Will Meghan be the pregnant beauty?

I'm loving it. If you could write longer chapters, I'd love it more.