by Akito01
Not only an unusual plot, but well laid out and well written, with just enough extra-sexual detail mixed in with the sexual. Well done!
It was different. I don't know if this actually happened, but it could have. It's a big, weird world out there. Keep writing!
She seemed to have the important stuff down. I think many men, make that many people, would want a partner that did what they said, offered sex often, and didn't give them any crap.
I liked this - well written and entertaining. A good reminder of the trouble our "little heads" can get us into as well! And I agree, she might make someone a fine wife, she certainly has her good points, language skills can come later!
I would stick to Spanish girls/women too, since I learned Spanish very well it would be no problem!
Well-written, but the ending was disappointing. “Yellow fever” is a 100% thing. I wish he would have stuck with her and knocked her up!