All Comments on 'The Wicked Stage'

I liked the light humor and sex intertwined and the good fast paced writing made the hole story enjoyable. Thanks ....Rich

Remove the junk from the story and use proper grammer in its place. The item is the frequent and over use of ... when there are proper grammer items to replace 99.9999% of these.

While you are fundamentally correct, your argument would have been stronger if you knew how to spell grammar.

<P>If you're not sure on spelling, I suggest you use Firefox, which has a built-in spell checker.

I'm very impressed by the combination of dry humour and a wet mother - although I don't know whether I should be smiling quite as much as I am right now. Your writing is intelligent and very well-paced - and personally, I thought the grammAr was well above average.

Great story - thank you.

can someone help me with that??

I enjoyed reading this story & I hope that you continue to write more like it.

especially in the bedroom when it comes to fucking between mother and son...they play their parts so well - vice is nice but incest is best......

So Harvey gets his first look at his own mother's slit, her mommy-hole, the wonderful hole between his mother's legs he came out of. It's the best thing Harvey will ever see in his life, the best thing any son can ever see, and the boy is mesmerized, awestruck, totally infatuated with his own mother's cunt. It is indeed her "sacred place," Harvey's own birth canal, and he grabs the chance to worship it. First with his tongue and lips, slurping it half to death, then with the big hard cock the boy's got jumping in his pants. His final and best tribute to the hole that gave birth to him is when he blows his young balls up inside his mother, filling her up with his creamy semen. It's a scene that mother and son will play over and over again, con brio.

just different characters

I loved the bit of humor in this story.

To me it seemed to add a touch of reality.