by Onagerian Surmise
Thot i recognized it as a slice of a longer novel over at stories online.
it is nice and sweet though.
I especially like the getting ready part, with the kids helping out. A very amusing role reversal.
Nicely done.
Since the teen boy and girl were having a sleepover in one house while their parents made it in the other house, bet they did not play checkers all night.
As a widower approaching the September of life, the tenderness of this tale hit me hard ... most likely as it so perfectly parallels my own friendship with a caring woman that is now in its third year. This could be be my own autobiography. Carry on, author, whoever and wherever you are!
This one, yes....It is Romance...Well written as usual, and with a romantic ending...4*
I think it was good to show all the nervousness in the beginning.
I would have liked to see a longer ending with marriage and see what transpires between both kids.