by AmandaNightly
this is such an interesting but brief taste of how it feels to be used and dismissed. would love to see it developed
You could take this theme in many different directions, hope you'll considering doing so.
What a wonderful story!
I agree that there should have been more, but that's selfish. It is just right as it is.
I thought it was a nice story, well written. Hope there's more to come, either about these same characters (perhaps something with the maid) or a different storyline altogether.
The hotel provides prostitutes for women, so what? Most good hotels have prostitutes working for them, not openly of course.