All Comments on 'The Winner Gets Everything'

Great to see a posting from our Scandinavian friend. Thanks. Let's hope there will be more in the future.

Really tough to understand. Needs major editing and correcting.

"One thing is for sure, this must be a genuine loving wife story."

is this like a fucking joke?

Very good plot, and interesting story. Harry is right, though, that you should have spent more time discussing that, although the no cheating rule was very important to Jennifer, her distrust of him was forgiven too quickly. Sebastian should have demonstrated his pride (that he had talked about earlier) by at least delaying the reconciliation.

Pleasant and well imagined by the author except, I found myself expecting him to tell Jennifer off because she refused to believe his word.

I am fairly sure that I would have walked.... But luckily for her he didn't! Yes, I amagreeing with Harry in terms of emotional reaction.. Even though it does not keep me from giving the story high marks!

STORY WAS SIMILIAR TO THE RED WINE/YELLOW DRESS STORY, WHICH WAS ANOTHER GOOD SUBMISSION. TK U MLJ LV NV

I would not have married her, but I do like the way you tell a story.

nice loving wife story

Always a pleasure to read your submissions, Yes even the fractured english which tends to add a sense of reality to the story. Keep them coming.

Happy endings are always fun. Thanks.

I have no problems with the English but I felt there was a lot of unnecessary material that could have been condensed.

WF, A little different for you but nonetheless, enjoyable and = with a nice ending!

While I enjoy your usual banter with and about cheating wives and their consequences, this was a pleasant change and the grammar...definitely your signature and theme - enjoyable too!

Harry, Cool It, she only knew what she thought good friends told her and showed her was true. She didn't seem like the hot blooded hotty that is typically street wise and would know better or be up to something. Good old mother cleared that up and Jennifer was more than happy to have her 'Honest Guy' back and...with guilt of stupidity - but - back!

Glad to see your Back!

I always enjoy reading your stories.

too long, too wordy, too boring, too ?

Damn,how could anyone even understand this crap?

Winterfrog:

I rather liked your bombastic plots, with the hero jumping up and down, swinging fists and such. So this story was a change from your usual. It was a pleasant read with a happy ending.

If we all stuck to some formula (Usually demanded by Anonymous),we would bore our selves and our readers.

Chilley

Bad guys foiled again. It's Saturday and this felt like a matinee I used to see when I was a kid.

Another classic, great job!

This was a very well paced and interesting story. It was full of detail but still short enough to read in one sitting. Believe me I'm taking note of that my stories seem to be getting longer. Anyway I loved reading this one like all of the others.

This "Romantic" story is a nice surprise from the author. Thanks for sharing it with us. I find that I prefer his more typical story lines better, and can't wait for the next one along those lines. But this was nice. Thanks again.

Hurts my brain trying to read and understand this incredibly unusual writing style.

Fortunately you are in the minority as most readers are quite taken with Winterfrog's style of writing particularly since English is not his first language.

If they upset you my suggestion is "DON'T READ THEM". Those of us who enjoy his submissions will continue to enjoy them without negative comments.

By the way, how many submissions have you made to Literotica?

I could understand your story, it was well written, vividly described. I have to admit, I didn't expect the story this good. But the story was placed in wrong category, it should go under romance. Loving wives category supports wives cheating with or without their husbands' knowledge or husbands cheating with or without their wifes' knowledge. If this is a real life story, then I'm very happy for you, congratulations! But be careful about submitting your stories in the right category frow now on. Take care. Bye.

Shut up you pathetic stupid moron. 'Loving Wives' is a mixed up fucked category that is about 'Wives' it is possible to write a 'Loving Wife' story about a wife that doesn't fuck around in fact to my mind that is what should be the norm not your cuckold cheating slut stories. If you want your wimp cuck whore shit then look elsewhere for your Fetish. Well done Winterfrog.

I wasn't aware that choppy, meandering writing with incomplete thoughts pervading most sentences was a style. If that's what you enjoy, great for you. Poor grammar and sentence structure, odd word choice, and choppy writing takes away from the story, regardless of how interesting the plot may be.

Sometimes just a good old fashion story where the good guys come out happy. Is good to read!! Thanks for sharing.

I have to admit when I first started reading Winterfrog's submissions, I was a little put off because of the thoughts being translated between languages.

I am happy that I have learned to ignore that issue and have come to enjoy most of your stories. This one is no exception.

Harry, I have to tell you. I would love to meet your wife. You must be truly blessed with the most perfect woman in the world.

If she wasn't you would certainly have dumped her years ago because mistakes are certainly not allowed in your world.

If you read all of Winterfrog's stories you come to realize that Scandanavian women appear to have a lot freedom and latitude to challenge their husband's and boyfriend's without it being as disrespectful. They appear to have much more freedom than women have over here. Are they possibly more feministic? Of course...but then Winterfrog's husbands just have to get that divorce paper and 6 months later it's all over. No fuss and no muss about it. They split everything and stay friends with each other afterwards. No big deal...just find another woman immediately if you decide or think it's over with the last one. That might be too civilized for America? Do we have to have the denial, anger, hate, pain, remorse and revenge first? I actually think we are getting closer to the simpler divorce here too. It's us old fogies that had the nasty and bitter ones.

Nice story with a happy ending, that's a rare commidity ,indeed, but still very nice for a change of pace.

Oh yeah, RonRWood, how about just a comment on the story and leave the social commentary to those who just might actually know what they're talking about.

is a new word to me. Just can't find it in my dictionary.

i love love stories. a good read for anyone who loves people in love. thank you.

How about just leaving a comment on the story and not bitching about other people's comments? ucwatididthar?

I prefer the actual loving wives - it worked very well and was well done

Your good story is hurt by the numerous grammatical problems.

wimps in the frogs tales. can't say that about the other 98%who are wimpy cuck authors

5 stars.

You need an editor, BADLY! Good grief!

Great to have a loving couple in a happily ever after ending.

I liked that the mother asked him for his side and help.

It cleared many things up for a strong marriage.

if they can pass the 1st hurdle. TK U MLJ LV NV

I see Harry noticed the problem too.

How do you go from the level of distrust that accusing him of cheating requires to let's get married in a single breath?

How does he get over her lack of trust without needing her to earn his trust again?

Liars expect others to lie.

Cheaters expect others to cheat

This is the second story of yours that has ended like crap. She dumps him without really talking to him, with little or no evidence of his cheating. She lets him walk out and doesn't really object. That should tell him how little she really cares for him. On the other side, he walks out without really talking to her or trying to prove to her that he's innocent. That little scene made him seem guilty. Why would she want him back? Why would he want her back? When Mom calls his answer should have been that he was done and for her to have a good life. That NOTHING could be done or should be done to resurrect the relationship as it was over and done with. Your ending simply sucked.

What is the story?

Why no revenge against Thomas and his wife?.

Your stories used to have the wronged party always get his revenge. What happened?

Normally I like more punishment but as your culture seems to be milder and after being known as wild in Viking days I will accept

Romantic story poor boy wins rich girl

4 stars

Just don't tell any of my fellow Marine Corps and Nam veterans

... the most intriguing part was Nelly and her relationship with her weird cousin Emil and that was never clarified. In comparison, Sebastian's relationship troubles with Jennifer were boring and predictable. He took her back awfully fast considering she doesn't seem to trust him AT ALL. Two days after she rips into him with very shoddy proof of his "cheating" she asks him to forgive and marry her? Yeah, you should have waited a while on that one, Sebastian. She clearly has trust issues to be worked out.

It was nice and had a happy ending but it wasn't a very satisfying story.

Whilst this story as a happy ending,would he really marry some one who accuses him of cheating without any proof other than gossip.

Too much sugar for me in this lemmonade. The first part was sounding like a nice original plot until lemonade started oozing in the Jennifer part. Not much here.