All Comments on 'The Wish'

With Halloween coming up, this is the perfect story. I was entranced from beginning to end.

eerie...but enjoyable to read and well written. Thank you for sharing this with your readers. respectfully a fan in Texas

enough for Halloween or any other day. Crazy, but fascinating at the same time. You can be proud.

Good luck in the contest.

Black Tulip

This was pretty good and creepy as well. Nice job.

that was pretty god, dont be hard on yourself,it kept me wondering how the tale would end from the very beginning, maybe the quick read through was a good idea you didnt dwell on it too long, you know how sometime it gets hard to know wheher youre finished with a story or not,you think, i'll just tweek it a little more, a little more, one more time and then you realise ya should have left it alone the way it was,well im glad u didnt tweek this one, u did a good job with it...Millisande