by Belle_in_south
Not liking Elle at all she seems like a domme that preys on emotionally vulnerable women. She already knows about the break up in Nashville and is using it to manipulate Jamie.
Okay ...your writing is phenomenal, but why do you not follow up your great stories with a chapter 2?
Definitely 5 πππππ
It's getting close to a decade. Are you ever going to finish this intriguing tale? The pace is a little slow, but the suspense and tension in Jamie's mind is delicious.
That was amazing! I have been reading your stories all afternoon and this is my favorite! I hope there will be a sequel to this one.
I would love to see where you bring this story. It has so many different ways that it could go.
you are inventive, and your language is, at times, beautiful. i look forward to more
Take us to new heights. This is going to be an intersting transition for Reagan.
The buildup is nice, though the scenes build up just enough to tease then end. I like the tease, but I prefer for the end to give me a last rush of satisfaction. i do look forward to new chapters of this story.