All Comments on 'The Wolf's Captive Ch. 01'
by anais_v
- 24 Comments
AhzureDragonover 11 years agoHope there is much more to this story. I love the start of it. Now I wonder if the father will come looking for her brother or not. Looking to see what happens next.
willieoneover 11 years agoI hope there will be a finish to this story, I am so tired of starting a story only to have it remain unfinished! So hope to see the next installment soon!
willieoneover 11 years agoI would have thought apart from her brothers capture she would have been glad to get a chance to get away from her father and get a gorgeous hunk in the process that it would be a relief and a possible chance of happiness.
DoctorWolfover 11 years agoI'm hooked! Hope you keep posting! Really addicting! Odd question, but why the ' and not " to denote speech? DW
LadyPartsover 11 years agoMedieval, shape shifter story with an actual plot! How unique!
Well done for the first chapter. I look forward to more.
anais_vover 11 years agoAuthor@DoctorWolf - good question! It's a habit I've picked up after my years of reading - some novels have used the ' ' which I seemed to find more pleasing
Also thanks to everyone for the comments
toylockerover 11 years agoWell written. Plot a little broken at some points, but still threaded togerther very well!
Keep writing. Will watch for continuing saga!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoAlthough always a writer's choice, use of " usually denotes speech, while use of ' usually denotes thought. I wonder your use of ' may cause confusion later. Otherwise great start
anais_vover 11 years agoAuthor@ anon, I researched into the quote marks because you had me thinking and found:
'In British English, quotation marks are called inverted commas, and the single ones are used more frequently than the double for direct speech.'
Which may be why I've come to adopt that pattern - I have read many novels in which single marks are used. For a character's thoughts, I italicise the text rather than use punctuation so hopefully there will be no confusion
sofia57over 11 years agoIt is a favorite! DIFFERENT!!!! Not the typical were story. I can't wait to read more.. but please don't keep us waiting a century for next chapter ;)
BadCittyLadyover 11 years agoI love this story and i am hoping that you will be posting more soon! i love wolf - human (or shape-shifter) stories! I do so hope that you have lots planned for this story and that you will be posting regularly for the story! also not to sound curd or anything but when you acculally get to the sex with them if it is wolf not to forget the knot and tying together part--i always love that part, i think it gives them a level of intamacy that goes deeper then we think it does (or hope it does!) Post soon i am dying to read more--lots more!! :)
lioness_71about 11 years agoCongratulations on becoming a Literotica author. I thought it was a good first story, with possibilities for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
Black_heart_Buderflyabout 11 years agoI really like this story. So much potential. I like your writing style thus far. Please don't keep us waiting to long. I love a good time piece story and Medieval England is one of my favourite such settings and non human stories are always good.. So keep on writing!!!
edzellskyabout 11 years agoI'm looking forward to reading more, don't give up on this site too soon.
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