All Comments on 'The Workmen Ch. 01'

by CherylOh

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PoorwriterPoorwriteralmost 10 years ago
WOW ! What a writer!

You are so good and this story is so fun to read. I will look forward to you finishing it.

ant4699ant4699almost 10 years ago
Very good!

I like where this is going and cant wait till the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Nice start

I can't wait to see how this story ends up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow

love the story. cant wait to read more.

CherylOhCherylOhalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for your nice comments. Chapter 2 will be coming soon.

LanceinBermudaLanceinBermudaalmost 10 years ago
WOW

Your descriptive writing style is fantastic. There may not have been any sexual intercourse but the sexual tension throughout the entire story was extremely erotic!!! Looking forward to more! Thanks for sharing!

Cheers

Lance

oh BTW if you ever need your garage painted let me know!!

DiannahDiannahalmost 10 years ago
4 stars

Great tease, and well-written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow what a story

Amazing story

Very erotic from beginning to the end

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