All Comments on 'The Wrong Elevator'

that was great, i love how chance stepped in when it was the most needed. i hope you continue this story, maybe have Dan and Carly end up married with a dozen kids, ten or twenty chapters in the future.

This was a truly 'erotic' story - A premise that holds together (mistaken identity,) a couple of characters who are likable and (given the short period of time,) get the feel of each other, an degree of anticipation of the sexual act, and then a creative, well written, sex scene. The earlier comment is right: Carly and Dan still have the rest of the night and the next day to celebrate his B-Day!

I don't know what else to add since I agree with both posters below. This story took my breath away!

YOU ARE A GIFT.......... A WONDERFUL GIFT TO ALL OF US!

DON'T KEEP IT TO YOURSELF!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I'll be paying attention to your work from now on

Your stories, your writing is so good that I am running out of superlatives and will soon be repeating myself. I am so glad that I am only half way through your collection.

That was sooooooo hot.... It was a beautiful piece that was well written. I loved how it began slow but the build was like magic. Loved it please write more.

ah, but to be the recipient of this much pleasure is simply a dream