The Xolt Ch. 02

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We spent about a week on Arcaina. I got clothes that would fit me as well as some shoes and a few accessories. Jing went to a table that had hand-crafted hair things for sale and he bought me a metal hair clasp that was similar to a chop-stick. The difference was the blue glass beads hanging off the stick. His reasoning was that it was one of his favourite things while his hair was long and thought that I would like one as well. I think it was just because he thought it looked pretty on me.

On our last day on the new planet Jing decided that he wanted to visit his old tavern. It was an old place that was probably amazing during it's time, but looked ratty now. There was an old crone of a lady who looked at Jing and fell backwards. She must've been the lady who took Jing in. Personally she did not appear to be a nice lady.

Jing was satisfied that he proved his past wrong, that he could be a somebody, and we were about to leave. At least, that was the plan. I was walking down the dingy streets in the "red light district" when suddenly I couldn't see. I started to scream, but nothing change. I was being kidnapped.

*~**~*

The area was moist but very cold. It could have been that I was out for so long that I was in a new country. Or it could be a change in atmosphere. What ever it was I did not like it. The creatures that had me captive were talking amongst themselves.

"How much do ya wager he'd go for?" One asked, slurping up what ever food or drink he had been enjoying. At least I hoped it was a food or drink. My brain went back to my past and thought of a horror movie where the monster would eat the human.

"Oh, who knows, eh? I mean he is human right, eh?" Another replied. He at least sounded less of a pig.

"Quiet. You fools do realize he can understand us, don't you?" This last voice...I recognized that voice. It was the voice of that dancer on our second day! That asshole was a scout! I was so pissed off that I adjusted the way I was sitting—just a little bit. But that was enough for them.

"Oh! Look at who's awake now!"

"Looks like he could use a beating, eh?"

"Enough you two, there's no point in damaging the goods now is ther—"

Smack!

I didn't know what was happening, but I knew it was a good thing. A warm body picked me up and I started to scream and struggle. Then I smelt him. Xe'Trygg. He came for me.

"Shh, baby, I'm taking you home."

*~**~*

Once we got back to the ship, Xe'Trygg threw me onto the bed and tore out of his clothes. He crawled next to me and kissed my neck and collar bone.

"I couldn't protect you," he whispered. "I couldn't save you from those monsters. You shouldn't have been put through that." I felt a small tremor shake through his body. "I'm so sorry, baby."

I turned to him and straddled his lap. Bending down I kissed him. I traced his lips and begged him to open for me. I sucked his slim muscle in my mouth as I kissed him.

"I love you, Xe'Trygg." I trailed kisses down his neck and unbuttoned his shirt and slipped it off his broad shoulders. Moving down I kissed his pecks and nipples, and even farther I kissed his abs and lower stomach. I felt him quiver underneath me.

"I want you to make love to me," I whispered, "please."

Xe'Trygg reversed our positions and pulled my pants off my legs and placed them on his shoulders. He reached into the bedside desk and pulled out a bottle of lube. I felt his cold, slick finger enter me, pumping in and out. He added a second and soon a third and fourth.

"Are you ready for me?" He huffed into my ear.

"Please, now," I moaned spreading my legs.

He lubed his cock up and slowly entered me. It hurt for a few moments but he didn't move until it became a dull thud. I nodded and he started to move. He changed his angle slightly and brushed my prostate and I came of the bed, clutching to his body.

"Oh, god!" I yelled, scratching my mates back.

"Fuck, Steven, so fucking good. I wanted this for so long, oh gods, so good." He growled pumping in and out of me.

I felt my body quiver and I came between our bodies. My tight hole milking my mates cock, he came as well, filling his seed with in me. Xe'Trygg kept pumping until he finished and fell on top of me.

"I love you."

"I love you, too."

Xolt: End

Thanks for ya'll who've read this story. I feel like over all it was a tad longer then the previous stories I have written! This is my first official attempt at Science Fiction, I feel like much more practice is needed, but please feel free to add comments and suggestions (Yes I know I need an editor but so far none such luck).

Just to update on Lina (because I know we promised a new series) she has taken it upon herself to add MORE courses to her plate, on top of a full time job. That woman is insane, but she has given me the go ahead to start the story. She said that once she has more time she will add her parts. By then we will have to change the formatting! So look forward to that story coming up soon!

Thanks for the votes and comments! Hope Ya'll have a great day ;) ~~Tae <3

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

DO THEY EVER HAVE KIDS!!! love you story #writeforlife

lonleylucaslonleylucasabout 11 years ago
I also very much agree

It was very rushed I suggest you add onto this because I wanna know what Happenes to Steven. Does he get pregnant? What happened to jing how many kids dies he have? Does Steven change because of drinking his mates semen? How does he change? I would really love to know the answers to these questions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I felt like you hurried it again in the end. I think you left two big things unanswered: the deal with him changing and how Xe'Trygg would see it as a failure as a mate that he was captured. The part of whether he'd change or not was the biggest thing though. You had it upset him enough to go to Jing, yet we don't know if he ever did or not.

Just try to get someone to read the story if not edit it and tell you if there are parts not fully developed or things left unanswered. I think that will help you make the story more complete. Overall, as a first try with sci-fi, it was a good start.

cannd

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more

Please give us more

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago

I agree with the others you have so much potential as metajinx says. I can see too that your heart is in this story but you do have too many unfinished parts to this story too.. Like will he change?? Can he have children like Jing? One more chapter too finish those off would be great.. Also I agree with pacing yourself and re read as you format well, and structure well too. For a good story to be great trust in yourself and proof read what you are writing, I do hope you find a beta writer, and you will see that your base is always good.

Can't wait to read the next story about brother number 2 I love your stories anyway so keep going :)

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