All Comments on 'There Must Be A Mistake Ch. 13'

WOW KEEP WRITING THIS IS GETTING BETTER

I was happy to see jen go off on him like she did. every point she made about gray being right is what have been saying since he first showed up.

This story could be the poster child of how to create and manage conflict. You, sir, are a master at your craft.

Thank you for another great chapter.

Not even highly rated books are able to create and sustain this level of humor, excitement and entertainment in every chapter. You are a master . Now please hurry with the next chapter.

What a way to begin a marriage. When my wife and I got around to getting hitched our day went to hell in a hand basket from the get-go. I won't give you all the details but let's just say that I am glad it was not a forerunner for the following 25 years of our lives together. To see what happened between Grey and Delicious it really put my own history into its proper perspective. Thanks.

This was another fine chapter and moved the story along nicely. I hope they find out who is behind all this soon although I don't think that will happen--people with lots of money have all the time in the world to get what they want. Fortunately Even has more, and lots of friends, to boot, who will not stop until the culprits are found and dealt with.

See you on the next time around.

Roger.

You know, you could set Grey and Delicious up by having Rod or Even tell them that any married woman of any age can have sex and not have to be 18.

Please keep going I love this story the length doesn`t bother me. You must keep Even on the ship he`s earned it after all he is responsible for everything going on all the characters are great.

I always check to see when my stories come online so I can judge when to post my next one. I don't know how you find out it's on the site before I do, but I want to thank you for all your wonderful comments. On another note, I just finished reading a very disconcerting book. If you want to find out why the US military never wins a ground war, please read: AMERICAN SPARTAN, by Ann Scott Tyson. It details point by point "How To Lose a War" instead of Winning One. We lost Afghanistan because of Colonels, Generals, and paper pushers, who wouldn't know one end of a gun from another. Prolonged_Debut10

The story is getting better more intrigue and less family Problems.

Can't wait to see who is behind the Attempted Kidnapping.

Where do you come up with the dialogue?