All Comments on 'This Could Work'

A ch. 2 might be interesting to explain in detail what and who is doing the "cuddling."

5*

I like Henry. I would have enjoyed more dialogue between him and him and Eileen especially in the lead in to sex. Maybe the two senior women were a little too matter of fact or easy. Eileen deserved some oral?

and quite lovely.

This is a nice simple story about a woman needing more out of her life but not wanting sex in it. It ended up working out quite well, but in real life I don't know that it would be so easy, but a book isn't real life.

Enjoyed reading your story!

Thanks again Amanda. Very refreshing.

signed...lowkeyone

Lucky Henry! Please come back to writing more stories, your work is excellent! Whosonfirst.