All Comments on 'This Was Going To Be The Last Time'

There wasn't a single person in the story with any redeeming qualities except Randy.

Everyone else should be exiled to a deserted island somewhere.

I’m sorry but you broke Cara’s characterization with your ending in what I believe was a poor attempt to pull off a twist ending. You spent four pages building her up as a deeply remorseful woman who intended this to be the last time pulling trains because of her intense love for her husband, even to the point that she told everyone it was the last time, only to have her reveal herself as a lying, manipulative bitch, trying to get her hubby back, with no intention of giving her lifestyle up. Sorry but it doesn’t fit as written. Perhaps if you had written her intention to lie to hubby if/when caught into the first part of the story, it might’ve worked.

Also, some YouTuber appears to have appropriated this story for their personal gain. If that isn’t you and they didn’t have your permission, you might want to contact YouTube.

You were hinting at something between Jane and Cara and their Mom, but you never delivered on it. It could have made this story a 4 or a 5, but instead I can only give it a 3 due to the quality of the writing, but boring, predictable plot.

Another cheating slut begging for forgiveness the slut should be happy that she still has her life cause the bitch and her lovers as well as her slut of a sister deserves to die if i was the husband in this story I would have killed them all

You're effing kidding me, right?? It has been going on for 8 YEARS. So, I had to skip to the end to see if the MC liked being a cuck, and yep, he does.

End of reading. Sorry.

No person, man or woman, NONE, with a single SHRED of self respect would have stayed.

Balderdash............ not even realistic...........

Not plausible.

Not great by any means.

Bof, la plupart de vos histoires sont intéressantes et ont le mérite que l'on a envie de les lire mais celle ci me fait regretter de l'avoir lue. Perte de temps.

I liked it...this is sad people bitch about it. If you didn't like it why read the whole thing......

What was so stupid other than a mid 30s guy hooking up with a 50 year old woman is the length of time it took him to decide what to do with a woman who had cheated on him for their entire relationship😂😂😂😂

Load of crap full of flaws eg

why would Randy have Cara on his health insurance?.As I have said before what is the point of having an editor of they can't pick up obvious errors?.

How the fuck does he justify getting with her mom? And how does a mother do that to her daughter? Both of those things killed this story, and made it kind of gross. Those poor boys will need therapy for sure. Except for Randy, there isn't a decent character in this story and the ending is so messed up that a score isn't warranted. You are a good writer, you just are a bit extreme here. No one likes weirdness in their stories, except for the weirdos.

I don’t think I need to explain why I hated this.

As usual,far too long for what it was.

Introducing children into a story creates complexity and risk to the plot and action. In this story, this very good writer turned them into invisible props, beginning with the very adult conversation carried on in their presence in the car on New Years eve. Yes, we read that they were asleep, but we all know how risky it is to assume a child sleeps through a heated and tense conversation held three feet away in a small vehicle. All of the home drama, their heretofore unknown grandmother and their catatonic mother the visited with and then lived with, and it was all seamless. S-s-s-shaky. Good writers take risk to stretch and grow. Count this one as a learning experience. 3.5/5.

StangStar06 is usually a very good writer but this story is dreadful. The premise of a wife who loves her husband but who continues to get gang-banged every New Year's Eve for the entire 8 years of their marriage is beyond ridiculous. First, there is no way that even the most trusting husband could fail to find out for 8 years what was going on. Second, there is no explanation as to why Cara is faithful for 364 days a year but then turns into a complete slut at a New Year's Eve party. The author doesn't even try to explain this beyond some hand wavy crap that for Cara, this is an annual test of her love for Danny. Stupid.

The whole thing with the mother in law is a bad joke. None of the characters are in any way sympathetic, attractive, or worth having any interest in and that includes Danny. This story is simply so poorly conceived and written that it is good for 1* and it should be zero if the voting allowed for that.

The MC's children will grow up to be sexually sadistic serial killers of women. For good reason in this particular universe...

5 Stars on a Great Story . Sadly I was once the New Guy in Town and Yes I married the Town Pump . But I caught her and She is now living in San Francisco . We had No kids and No I did Not get turned on watching her get screwed . I got Very Pissed and Started hitting things like her Boy Friend .. I also got tested for STD's 3 times .

"Who can we trick into marrying the town slut." LMAO....great story.. Can't make you a favorite because you already are one.. Thanks SK742

1 star for this story. This is just another hopeless sad FANTASY.

I am just not into the skanky, slut, pulling a train, kind of girls. YES, STD's are one of the greatest punishments you can receive, when you choose to have sex without condoms and with multiple partners. With the amount of information that is available today, I do not understand why authors on this site seem to enhance or aggrandize unprotected, multiple partner sexual activity. It is one way to guarantee you will have a much shorter lifespan.

Why do hey always say it was the last time, she was giving him up, it was never going to happen again, she was never going to see him ever again. You might have guessed that I have experience in this. I even got the "its not what you think" in the middle of catching them. I beat the hell out of him, spent 15 days in jail and went back to my life without her. This is a good story, a lot of people to sort out but not too bad. Other than stirring emotions in me, i saw nothing to bitch about in your writing, no petty BS. Not a story for everyone but quality is high.

Crap. No man needs time to think about these offenses. This author has joined the ranks of those who write wussy wimp men. Congrats to reaching new low standards. Cannot give negative stars, this was just shit.

1 star - no comment

Your character Danny isn’t realistic. He catches his wife in a gang bang and needs time to think about what she did. Then he finds out she’s done it throughout their entire marriage and is still uncertain.

Surprising end for Jane. Didn’t see that coming.

Overall, great story. One of your best!

Thank you!

Why would a wife caught in a gangbang think the husband would ever take her back? That is the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard, but all LW cheating whores seem to expect it.

Great story as usual. Love a male character with self respect!!!

No sane person marries someone 25 years older than them. I have seen it once at 20 years- just doesn't work. One gets tired and wants to stay in, the other is so bored and feels like they are wasting their life. One has ambition, the other doesn't care any more. Take the ridiculous marriage out and it would have worked. The mother was just as bad as the daughters, so why not stay with the slut he was with? You know the one that could have children and was not in menopause. I wonder how many men would think it was sexy to be married to their mother in law, only she is also a skank as well as old.

You would be a half way decent writer if you could resist the temptation to make your characters behave in a way that no one ever would! He catches his wife in a gang bang and needs to think about it for a couple of days. Her sister is also pulling trains but he won't tell her husband, because he has to think. BULLSHIT!@

that has been done and done over again.

good story as is.

5/5

My Next door Neighbor went through the same thing .. She was almost 50 when He found out .. Gee I wonder who told him

in this story. The funniest part was a bank was open on New Year's day.

Sad that he was taken in by the act!

Glad he saw through the performance and did the right thing: Burn the Bitch!

Not quite enough revenge on the men involved, still we can't have everything.

Why trade one whore for another whore?

Another great story

Absurd

Sisters are both sluts, mother is also a slut. So he dumps one slut for another. Hmmm, his mother in law to boot eeeew, sick puppies all around. What are the kids going to think when they grow up. Find this story really disgusting on many levels. Thank god it’s only a story.

great story,sandy sounds like a milf i'd like to roll with.

... do it again.

Another masterpiece from a LW legend. Always enjoy reading your work.

I was already to give this story 5* until you killed off Jane with a weird VD.

This was really a good read. Thanks

"This is my last time. I have cheated on you for 10 years, but I promise I won't do it anymore." So, what? Consider your marriage is your tiny baby. It takes both the husband and wife to love it and nurture it. So, when you cheat, it is the same as taking a .357 and shooting that tiny baby each time you cheated. So you promise not to shoot it any more. Well, guess what? The baby is dead! And your promises are a waste of breath.

I've rarely read a story with such plethora of truly revolving characters. Apart from Randy and Joe, who are only mildly nauseating, the other inhabitants of the story are singularly vile specimens of humanity. I think it's pretty much a dead heat between Danny and Jane (cruel, manipulative, vindictive and unfeeling) for the prize of resident arsehole of year with Cara and Sandra (merely lying, selfish sluts) lagging a little way behind.

LA

The behavior by Joe was one of my favorite parts, as well as Danny's reaction. Those sort of genuine moments are rare in the LW category.

What a cast of characters....Danny has no friends and can't seem to get any woman except what's in the family. Jane has the right name for him....Doofus! Those kids are going to be really fucked up, just like his wife and sister in law and it all comes down to Sandy ....the totally fucked up mother! She and Doofus make this story complete except for the title....it should be The Comedy of Errors and Fuckups!! Gave it a 2 and I'm being generous!!

There was no sex scene or love between them. You just said it happened and then moved on... felt rather lame

, marry a girl whose parents are still together and whose previous experience can be counted on the fingers of one hand with fingers left over. Do that and your chances are much better than if you marry a girl who "used to be wild". Past behavior IS an indication of likely future behavior.

Having said that, here's the problem. He can't raise the kids in that town. The other kids will hear about mom and it will just get ugly from there. I suggest this strategy:

"Baby, I'm willing to take you back under these conditions. You sign a post-nup saying if you cheat again, I get the kids and all our possessions and money. Second, we move to get our kids away from the stories and these people. Third, you don't let the kids be around Jane or anyone else who knew this was going on."

You take her back and move. She eventually cheats and you get it all.

Interesting story but as your other story points out some tendencies are in the DNA. As you made it clear, the mother was as bad as both her daughters and gramps just slowed them down.Once she was off the wagon for a while"You can't fitght nature". he he he.

I would have burned ALL of those guys homes the very next day. Their wives would have all gotten copies of the video. I live by a simple rule do onto others as you would have done to you. You don't cheat and you don't fuck another guys wife or girl friend.

ok so the mother messed up their childhood years later she comes back only to steal her daughter's husband!!!! this is bullshit

Beyond absurd. So absurd was the story that I longer for more superfluous mustang babbling. How anyone favorited this is beyond my comprehension.

Good story. My second read and I still loved it.

Yes she became a real looser.. She lost a man that loved her completely for what a gangbang on New Year's Eve. How can people be so stupid??

Mack

Too much psycho-babble in this overly long story.

Somehow,even though Cara and Jane were a couple of sex-addicted gangbangers, their physical descriptions made them seem unattractive,a couple of porkers,if you will.(Oink,oink!)

Danny was turned into a dip-shit at the end also,playing around with Mama Sandy right in front of Cara. And wasn't it a little too convenient,and contrived,that Joe Stephens would reappear with incriminating evidence on his phone,just in the nick of time?!

And even though Jane was made to appear to be a fat shrew who many men "wouldn't want to fuck her with your dick",she maintained her influence over Cara as if she was the Queen fucking machine. (The best thing about this story was that twat dying from painful VD surgery. You have to wonder how many near-sighted doofuses were bemoaning that "VD is nothing to clap about" after sloshing their way into her"Great Divide"!

Have read a bunch of your work. Guess I'm a fan. You're a sick man StangStar. I like that!

A couple of slut sisters like those two deserved to be dumped like last week's

garbage.

And I don't blame the guy a bit for taking an interest in the mother-in-law. I dated

a couple of girls myself that, back in the day, if things had worked out a little

differently, I may have made a play for their mother.

I mean, I'm just saying, a hot older (slightly older) woman with all her marbles is

much better than a younger chick who's three cards short of a full deck.

Good story, 5 stars from me.

If she loved him like she said she would have stopped when she became fully aware of it. And the comment to herself that she was getting older and this would be the last of the gang bang . parties and she thought of her husband while she was being fucked at her last party. What a crock. Good story have read it before she gave up everything to have nothing.

Ron

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Good writing but why do the wives always have to be stupid, and crazy? Cheating is about being selfish to such a degree that you are willing to hurt people that you claim to love for an orgasm and an ego rush. Some smart people cheat, and most cheaters no that their actions will likely end in divorce and do not protest it when it happens. Mostly what cheaters lack is empathy. The ability to hurt others without remorse is on the spectrum of the sociopath. That is a personality disorder which essentially means that they are bad people to be around. Inside the mind of a cheater that is caught is simply a tactical plan. They continue to think of themselves first and will do anything they can to get the best divorce deal that they can. They are only about themselves.

I immediately disliked this story because it was a rather formulaic "reveal" in the start of it. It took a while for some of the heart and soul to start coming out. But I DID start appreciating it after there was more of a look into the characters themselves.

Stang, you've written some crazy shit over the years, like grandma getting caught in a threesome in the barn with grandson. Wtf, you born in Appalacia? But I have enjoyed a lot of it. One thing you could do is just stop with knitting in these semi-perfect endings. You dig? You didn't have to have him do the Tennesee with mommy-in-law fer chrissakes. A story will usually be better with some well-appointed loose ends; some existential mystery; a little bit o' Sartre instead of Springer.

On the other hand, you might have had Jane get one of those South American flesh-eating parasites on a gangbang cruise down in Cancun. The parasite was contracted on the site of a romantic mexican jungle waterfall (it was once in a Speilberg movie!). Problem was, the little critters ate her genitals and vagina clean away. Lucky the doctors killed the parasites before it got to her inner organs!! But now she has to live with a little plastic tube sticking out of her crotch.

Damn you, Stang and all you crazy bastards, look what you done to me!

And isn't that what it's all about? 5*

Thanks for the offering.

I have read all of Stang's stories. and in everyone of them a cell phone is slammed down on someone while they are talking. Who do you slam an iPhone? Is there a pone slamming app I am missing? LOL just wondering because it would be great to be able to slam the phone on someone like the old days.

Well maybe a little, because for all her fine words. She was also once the town whore and as they say once a cheater Etc.

No I'm more surprised that he didn't kick Cara and her sister in the cunt on the way out the door on new years eve.

Still characters don't do that sort of thing in these stories, however much they take the piss out of the poor dumb husband!....... Pity that!

the story leads the reader into thinking that she really had mental issues, indeed she did, but not until the guy shows up with a recorded phone conversation does he realize the depth of the problems. I was beginning to believe he should take her back. better the devil you know, than the one you don't. after all he did fall in love with her, and was happy for 10 years. and the truth will set you free. don't you hate cliché's?

Good story. Ummmmm, what happened to the kids? They weren't even a footnote...

the wife was never faithful to him and her wedding vows were null and void from the first year. The marriage should have been annulled not taken to divorce. It would be surprising that the two sister were total gangbanged for years and no STDs occurred with multiple partners. Her actions alone proved she did not respect nor love him. Think about it the two sisters actually send him out of the party regularly so they could fuck in the time he was gone. Where in that do you find any love or respect.

he thinks the first cheater in the series can change? Or will he find out on the 4th of July which holiday she celebrates?

The mother admitted that she fucked anything that moved for years, but had an epiphany and would not do it anymore. So why does he believe that she would stay faithful but absolutely does not believe his wife would? He "can't trust" his wife but he can trust her mother? Seems illogical.

Really? That was just too great a leap for me. And just too weird for me. I'm afraid nothing would have made me like this particular story, but I would have liked to know a little more about Sandy and her kids and why the relationships got to the point where they seemed to want to kill one another. That old saying "like Mother, like daughter" keeps floating around in my mind. Or the "apple doesn't fall far from the tree". If I'm in his shoes, I think I would have moved a long ways away from all these crazy women. Not a great story. Maybe next time.

regardless of what any woman would do, a man doesnt kick his kids' mom out and move her replacement slut in on the same day - especially when it's her mother- without extreme consequences. and the older they got, the more they would realize how fucked up their father was.

hypocrite says: "When you love someone you commit your heart and soul to them only. And you do it without conditions,"

i guess that means that he (and all your protagonists) didnt really love his wife in the first place.

Yeah, it's amazing how many times in these stories the wife decides to end her affair(s), and instead of telling her lover(s), "I'm not doing it any more," just HAS to do it one last time.

only a few questions or comments:

why did it have to be her last time instead of just refusing to do it? Rock bands do a farewell tour for the money - what was her reason?

another college gal seeking an MRS

what kind of stupid tradition is a New Year's gangbang. Do you do it under a condom instead of mistletoe or ??

Jane was less in touch with reality than her sister

This story was not up to par and needed some serious editing. I don't know if SS06 intended a couple of things early in the story, but both made me smile.

1. The lawyer was Ernie Banks. I wondered what he did after he retired from MLB. (HA!)

2. Danny said too Jane, "Jane, you ignorant slut..." Isn't that what Danny Akroyd (sp?) said to Jane Curtain on SNL?

Never saw a positive comment from you on one of Stang's tales, Rabt123, so it seems that you dislike the author himself, or is it just Mustangs? I think a commenter on one of my tales said something about you getting the crap kicked out of you by a Mustang owner or his wife? I'll have to check and see if I can find that one again. LOL

How am I to know if I dont like em unless I read em.? Actually I like a lot of Stangs more recent stories, but this one is just dumb.

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@Rogn123

Man, if you hate Stang tales, why do you read them?

@Stang

Another good one where the cheaters get what's coming to them, and Hubby ends up with a sexy MILF who won't fuck around on him.

5 Solid Stars.

One has to conclude that if you drive a mustang you will be a psycho slut magnet and you will lose all ability to recognize what goes on around you. We are expected to believe that the bozo and his cop brother in law for more than 8 years never heard that their slutty wives were pulling trains at every new years party? None of the other wives ever made comments? Do the two dumbasses have no friends that would have clued them in? The B-I-L must be the worst cop ever . This story really makes no sense.

"Jane you ignorant slut." makes it worth 5 by itself, but it's a well written story that is deserving of a good review anyway. Fun read.

I might be able to buy the FIRST party after they got together as some sort of a "test", but when she found she still liked Danny more, she should have stopped.

SS06, gotta love the pop cultural references.

In fact, I would go so far as to call it an 'ewww' story. From a slut in a slut family, to the slut mother of the sluts?

Naw, I was kind of disgusted by the whole thing.

He was stupid for even letting her into the house. She was stupid by not having her lawyer make them start the divorce proceedings again due to him letting her into the house.

He was a green if loving boyfriend and husband to think that once a slut she would just change into a loving wife. It has been my experience that a prostitute that gets out of the business and marries is more faithful than a woman that just fucked many men for the fun of it and then marries. Not true in all cases, I'm sure. Excellent story.

they was no need to remain friends just a bitch that birthed his kids easily forgotten.

I doubt any medical professional would suggest he allow her to move back in, getting her hopes up, knowing that he was never going to take her back. When he would have dumped her the second time it would have been even more devastating, so no shrink would suggest that. I know she was only pretending and faking it, but the shrinks didn't know that. Then again, if they couldn't see that she was faking, then they were pretty crap shrinks to begin with, so they might have suggested something dumb. Therefore I take it back, you can ignore this comment:)

You're head over heels about Mustangs. Yeah they're a great car, but I've owned a Firebird, albeit briefly, and a Camero as well as a Mustang, only a 1966 Colt. I'll take the Camero every time.

I'm amazed at the neat stories you write. This was totally wild! Dumping the wife to get the mother, a youngish mother. You are an interesting storyteller, and you're definitely in the same league with the crowd you listed. I would have added Matt Mareau and Francis Macomber to the group though.

The characters were vivid and realistic. Nice story very enjoyable.

The mother angle was interesting...but I am certain a truly remorseful mother would not make that decision Sandy did...and if she did, I sure as hell wouldn't want her as a wife if I were Danny. Do you know how screwed up Danny's sons would be? Good thing you didn't make them girls instead of boys...cause that shit can be a family curse.

However, I did enjoy the story was rooting for Danny and Randy along the way. Good story.

... the last sentence exemplifies a common problem: "... because at least for Cara and I, that New Year's Eve was the last time." It's "between Cara and ME. Just leave out the "Cara and" and see if it sounds right. After a preposition (between, for, with, under, over, to, of, ... always use the subjective form. ("me"--not "I"). "between you and me" not "between you and I"; "for him and her" (not "for he and she"). For readers who know the difference, it takes something away from a good story.

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I enjoyed the story and the basic plot development. However, I felt that the switch to Cara's perspective (point of view narration) tended to break up the continuity of the story and its telling. Flipping back and forth in this instance at least for me made the story's flow feel more chaotic, choppy, and confusing rather then presenting a smooth seamless transition that served to enhance the story flow and telling.

Personally I also would have enjoyed reading more about the developing relationship and emotional bond that was growing between Jake and Sandy in more detail. Further information would have allowed both characters to fill out and become multidimensional presenting richer more rounded and enjoyable characters.

What I love about your stories . . . In addition to being erotic, they are great stories with interesting twists and turns. You are a truly a gifted writer. Thanks for the hours of entertainment.

I wanted to comment on the way the story ends.

First, I love Danny's point that Cara doesn't get another chance because she already had ten chances.

Second, I was disappointed with the way Cara was dismissed from the story after that. "She lives at Jane's house, visits the kids, asks me for another chance, and curses me and Sandy" doesn't seem a full-enough treatment of how she thinks and feels post-divorce. Since she was the narrator and viewpoint character for a bit mid-story I feel like how she processes the divorce is something the story needs for completeness. That's especially the case since the story provides conflicting evidence for how she takes it: "I guess I'm beginning to see the pain that you went through. Up until now I only felt the pain of me losing you." implies she's starting to "get it" about what she did and why it was bad, which is in conflict with her blaming Jane and cursing Danny and Sandy on into the future.

I enjoyed the story, I just wish the ending had been more detailed - and possibly switched viewpoints again.

...although there could have been some kind of commitment. Somehow I wouldn´t have been disappointed, if Cara and Danny had somehow been able to repair their marriage. Nevertheless: This ending here is satisfying!

One of your b est, in my opinion. Keep at it (please more of this sort!).

Full 5 Stars...

to the Point she screwed up and he called her on it. then to Complicate things for her her Mom shows up with more going for her then her Daughter. and in the End is left with Memories and not much else.

The characters were interesting. but no one seemed desperate to commit to a relationship one way or the other. She claims to love him, but casually has dozens of affairs, even though she knows it's wrong. Not really a compelling tale.

I do wish you would have given us a explicit sex scene bedsides the New Year's scene and more details about the divorces he caused.

Served them right. I no longer mess with married women although I used to (and felt a little guilty sometimes).

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