by random_librarian
A good start, but the ending seemed... Abrupt. I hope there is more to come.
Interesting premise so far. Like the other poster said, this one ended quite abruptly at the end. It'd be interesting to see the different personalities and physical attributes of the various girls to come through his door. Please continue.
It is probably a good BDSM story for people who fancy those, but as an erotic coupling story... No