All Comments on 'This Year's Model'

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fingalfingalover 10 years ago
Very nice

A good start, but the ending seemed... Abrupt. I hope there is more to come.

x0x01001x0x01001over 10 years ago
Please continue

Interesting premise so far. Like the other poster said, this one ended quite abruptly at the end. It'd be interesting to see the different personalities and physical attributes of the various girls to come through his door. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wrong category

It is probably a good BDSM story for people who fancy those, but as an erotic coupling story... No

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