by midwestgent
...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
Your story has it all. I rated it a perfect 10 but they only allowed me to vote it a 5.
Your story was absolutely AWESOME!! Office rules are one of the strongest aphrodisiacs going. I know, I've had a few and they are always hot. I married one of them and it's still all good. Thak you for a wonderful experience.
Really good work Author - talented, flowing and arousing in a respectful arena. Everybody wins.
Again thanks in hopes of another in your time.
With High Regard
Oh if every office had a "Kelly." Wonderful fantasy which makes one want to work harder and climb the corporate ladder for those nice "perks." Very well written.
Chalk another one up for Midwestgent! This is one of my favorite stories of his and I EAGERLY anticipate his next submission. Defintely the best writer on Literotica, in my opinion. Thanks and I really look forward to reading more...and more...and more!
But when the sex happens it happens much too fast. And lacks details.
Gave it three stars.