All Comments on 'Those Spanish Eyes'

Uhg.... That's not right, damn cut off. Of course we want to known what her fantasy is. More please.

Wonderfully developing the story board, you have done an excellent job in writing a really good, gripping and intensive story.

Now what on Earth is her fantasy????????????

Please continue. I loved it!

this story was one of the best on this website...i loved it. i loved how your characters were so sensual.

I wouldnt change anything . Please continue

Well written you've done a good job. Nice tension building

good story that reflects every day relationships. everyone has their own fantasies, and I am curious as to what hers is. please continue.

young hispanic women have always been one of my fantasies and my only recommendation would be to describe her a bit more. Her beauty, skin color, nipple color, etc.

If this is a fledgling example of your work you should do it professionally. Great stuff!

Very nice, I would love to read more.

Worse than the movies... always cutting off right when we really get involved in it. I suppose if it were 500 pages i would say the same thing though :) Well done.

Well done! So much said and so much passion in just a couple of (web) pages (Brevity is an area I'm working on in my own stories). I really enjoyed the natural banter between the two characters especially in the parts leading up to their intimate encounter. Dialogue defines characters so much and I had a very clear picture of the two people. Continue, please!

Love the characters....good development! Enjoyed the description of the intimacy - very realistic. I HAVE to find out her fantasy...I just hope it doesn't involve pain, as I find nothing pleasurable in that.

Just please keep it coming! Fantastic characters and very well written. I can't wait for Those Spanish Eyes II

it keepsyou interested and wanting to know more.

Impressive for someone who hasn't written that many stories here before. I loved it and would enjoy hereing the rest.

I have loved a spanish woman, and your story brought back memories I had long forgotten... good memories!