All Comments on 'Three on One'

There isn't enough stories that take this angle; very well done. I am very much hoping you continue on with the scheming and sexy plans Cindy has for our helpless hero!

This is a very well written story. Not personally what I would call the "submissive" type, but this story had a nice angle to it.

Keep it up man.

I'm throbbing hard...and wishing for more....

Hot story... '5' from me! I guess in the next part he's blackmailed to fuck Victoria who clearly wants to give him a test drive. Interesting twist on the typical rape fantasies found in this section and definitely a good read... well written, even if not completely plausible; I still lost myself in the story, read to the end and wanted more!

Mmmmmm I could read that over n over hehe I cam 3 times reading that !!!! Nice work

i came sooooo much reading this. it was awesome!

i came three times,

amazing.

That was one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I desperately hope you continue this story.

Fantastic

Possibly THE best story i have ever read. Well written and hot as hell. PLEASE continue it.

Oh hell yes, I came over and over reading that. Great job, keep writing, this rocked. I'm getting hot just thinking about it.

Ohhh my god, this is the hottest, most AMAZING, most unforgettable fantasy I've ever read! I can't get it out of my head! Two weeks later, and I keep coming back to read it again. My heart is pounding! Please write more! We want MORE! :)

Marie is a cutiepie! Victoria and Cindy are hot! Cindy is alpha female and wow was that sexy! I hope you write more female seducing men forcibly hehe

So much sex, I would have loved to trade places! I'd have filled them much sooner! Then Victoria next....Terrific turnaround on forced sex.

HOT!! That was the effing hottest thing I've ever read on the internet! I want to practice making babys with you and all your characters! You need to write more more more!

That was incredible! I liked that you introduced some sex appeal early and created suspense around who was going to fuck who. Some great descriptions of male pleasure and orgasm. If only the female side was treated with the same detail. I felt teased the Victoria was left out but I hope she plays a part in a sequel!

If I was Paul, I'd take that to a fucking tribunal. Horrific.

Extremely well written, a good read (not too long and not too short). I love how you've even written the grunts and groans down as proper dialogue. Flawless story.

I really hope you write more, so far you've written just one piece, I really do hope you write more.

Thanks.

Soooo very hott. Classic Fantasy but not cheesey. Perfectly done. Loved all the small details,...the hint of Maries soft ass behind her black panties under the lifted skirt.. I was rooting for Paul, triumphant victory to reverse rolls on Cindy, wanted so bad for him to enjoy her breasts. BRING Back a Chapter 2, love to find out how Cindy gets Victoria involved in blackmailing Paul.

I have read many stories on here and this one had me sucked in unlike any other. Fantastic job.

Dam this story is awwwwesome. Fuck I have to friends of my girlfriend who were perfect for fantasizing and this story helped CONSIDERABLY! FUCK I CUMMED HARDER THAN EVER BEFORE!!!

I've never been drawn in by anything on this site like this one story, here. I satisfied myself twice, during it. And I even completed the story, afterwards (which I never do). Very well done! The best literotica has to offer!

great story, why not carry it on?

Amazing story, well written, loved the description of all the details. Very very arousing. How come Victoria never got a turn with him? ;)

Honestly, my favorite story on here so far. Great job. Loved it, cant wait to try this one myself ;)

that was so intense!! seriously made me cum endlessly. every time one of the characters came i did :) you should write more stories cuz your amazing!!!

Where can I get one of these toys? It would be gr8 to hold out that long again for my wife without any booze...

Is there going to be a part 2?

Let him have all 3 in one giant, amazing orgy

Wow, what a rush! There's no other story on Literotica quite like this one. Man, I wish my gf would talk that way! ...and tie me down like that! ...and let her friends to watch us fuck like that! ...and let her hot friend bang me like that! Holy shit, dude. Please tell me there's more!

...that this author hasn't written anything else.

But still, bravo, for one of the best stories on Literotica!

you have a definite talent for erotica. can't wait for your next story (part 2?).

This story was amazingly well written and hot as hell but just when I was getting wound up, Marie and Cindy's diatribe about him fantasizing about Cindy while he fucked his girlfriend was kind of humiliating for Marie, I dunno, it kind of killed it for me :(

Why must good things come to an end!?

I loved their "game", I loved Marie's cuteness, and I loved how Cindy got her payback at the end. Poor Victoria. :(

I got through the first page--what kind of a wimp is he? She challenged him physically, he doesn't have to be a "gentleman" any more, he can flip her over and go help his gf. That changes the story, but at least it's accurate--unless he IS a wimp. If the writer were a girl, maybe, but for a guy? I quit there. I won't vote, because it's his first, but improve or make it the last!

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica, most stories usually can't hold my attention for 5 pages but this one had me completely and totally enthralled. Please keep up the good work. Id love to see what is going on in Cindy's mind, since blackmail is clearly something she is considering...

It is nicely done and very entertaining. Best regards, Jane

Dude, you seriously need to write some more. This one is way too awesome to be your first and only story.

great read mate :) seriously keep up the good work

I have never wanted a big, fat, juicy cock more in my life

Not much else to say. Very good!!! One of the best I've ever read.

So well done I was shocked at how good it was

I will be fantasizing over this for quite a while

I hope you do more chapters with this

This is easily the best sex story i have ever read,i love the teasing,the athletic,sexy girls,totally love Cindy...LOL,obviously the strong,dominate,fit,sexy one of the lot,i loveeeee the way she straddles Paul and press her hips down on him and teases him,then how the girls pin him down to test the toy on him and then i love how Cindy holds him down and rides him hard,strong and without mercy until he cums,DAMNNNN she's so fit,strong and athletic,i loveeeeee this story,i hope you post more stories with girls pinning down guys and forcing them to cum without mercy

Somebody's got the writing skills allright :D The rhythm of the text was amazing. Written by someone else, this story could have ended up rather long-winded and monotonous with such an insane amount of passion and continuous drive, but you managed it. Can't wait to enjoy your other stories... After I recover ;) And btw, I want Cindy. Bad. Now. :P Props.

-SeIsoKissa

Victoria was a naive moron. "I'll tell Marie!" ??? Yeah, cuz when you have no control over what's happening to you, you suddenly have the resolve to bear it out because someone is going to tattle on you.

LOVED IT! GREAT STORY WITH ENOUGH DETAILS IN IT TO MAKE IT BELIEVEABLE .KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING AND CUMMING AND CUMMING ! I KNOW I DID ! SEVERAL TIMES IN FACT .THANKS VERY MUCH !

one of the best I've ever read on here.

You are posting cheating-force sex. That is against the rule. You cannto make a series to this.

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Very well written. The energy is palpable. Super sexy scenario. 5 stars, favorited.

i really want a sequel... please!

I loved the careful, but not too elaborate decriptions of the four teens' thoughts and reactions. Added to the arousal-factor immensely. I even liked the ridiculous female "logic" about what constitutes "cheating". I never thought I would get off on a story about a guy being restrained, but this worked for me like few others have.

One word to the idiots posting about "wimps" and "non-consent": if you are such a concrete-headed, comically "macho" horse's ass that, as a straight man, you couldn't just get off while three sexy teen girls give you a double bj and then two of them ride you to their orgasm and yours (even restrained), then you are just as mentally challenged as the guys who like to be whipped by a dominatrix.

I have read a lot of Erotica. This is my first time grading a story and commenting. This story popped over and over. Nice creativity.

Thanks!

Please please please give us more!!

My stepmother's extra-marital, secret lover sent me this story out of the clear blue... and it's been on my mind late at night when I go to bed, early at dawn when I wake up... a marvelous hint at what's in store for me when I finally say "yes" to them... great story, the BEST I've read - ever!

Blanca

Man-o-man, I stroked the entire time I was reading this and somehow managed to hang on edging after edging.

I read a lot of Literotica and this story ROCKED! You gave yourself the perfect story line for the sequel with Cindy and Victoria using blackmail to get Paul to use and abuse. Marie has also shown her exhibitionist side that can be played into the story as well. Extremely well written!

so hot and sexy I can't believe it

wow what a turn on. very good story

It was a great story. I only have one problem and that is that I abhor rape in any way shape and form. Yes I am a guy, I enjoy sex a lot. That said teenage hormones and all this was still a rape scene and don't think it was anything else. I was a victim of such an act of violation. Did I have the correct hormonal responses? Yes, with me I was taken advantage of by an older girl and her girlfriends. They were supposed to be my babysitters. Screwed me up for a long while.

I understand that yes this is a stroke story and a wild one at that but just how do you think he would feel when he could finally think straight? Forced to cheat on his girlfriend, and betrayed by that same girl. If anyone asks yes a man can be raped and not just by being penetrated.

Sorry folks but this is just my honest opinion. And for the record i was not yet 13 at the time with a seven+ inch equpment. Imagine that and no idea what anything was about. So enjoy the story, was well written but keep in mind what it really was.

I so want to see another story from you guys it felt like i wanted to f**k someone well bye

Feel u bra, same here.

I don't think Cindy and Victoria need to hide anything from Marie. Marie essentially gave Cindy permission, maybe even ordering her to: "Yeah... when I'm done with you, it's Cindy's turn! She will fuck your brains out!" Either Cindy or Victoria could innocently explain to Marie what she missed. Victoria: "Don't worry, Marie, Cindy took care of Paul just like you wanted. You're right, he was a monster! Paul tried to resist for a long time, but Cindy finally forced it out of him!" Marie, to Cindy: "What?! You fucked my boyfriend while I was passed out?" Cindy: "What? You said..." Victoria: "Yeah, Marie, we both heard you. You sounded pretty serious when you said Cindy would get Paul after you if he didn't come for you." Cindy: "Yeah, believe me, it wasn't easy riding him that long, but I had to do it for you!"

You guys have never riddin a quad before. I admit this one is awfully young but never to soon to find the groove........

Because , of course, this is fiction. Paul woke Marie up and told her everything! All the evidence was there in front of her face. She went ballistic. Threw Paul out and he was glad to go because these women were bat shit crazy and he wanted nothing to do with any of them. Then she started in on the other girls and proceeded to ruin any relationships Cindy and Victoria had. She moved out and left them to pay the rent. All in all it was a complete cluster fuck in exchange for some meaningless sex. Boy was that stupid!

Anon post on 03/08/15...

That's an ending I could get into.

Sounds like the beginning of a very interesting relationship.

Victoria should have took off her clothes and sat on Paul's face, then feed him some fresh girl cum.

He would have fucked her too.

Now, that would make it three on one!!!

Honestly, I am hoping you write another one about these 4...I mean, at a minimum I can see Cindy and Victoria plotting together how best to arrange round 2...

I could see Paul being pissed at Cindy, Victoria, and maybe even Marie. Cindy was evil, as was Victoria. They had nobody's interest but their own. Marie was okay. I think she in this for the fun of it...wanted to give Paul some fun. At least it was fun for him until he was tied up. I haven't figured out why she allowed that.

Paul was just plain taken advantage of. I could see him leaving the other three for a few weeks, coming back to Marie after that time, but never being around Cindy and Victoria (at least alone) again.

well done

What's with all the bullshit of it not "cheating" as long as the guy won't cum? What the fuck? It's cheating the moment they started getting intimate without Marie's consent.

(Though much shorter, when her friend makes the comment about tell me if you masturbate or I'll tell about how quick you came the first time with Marie...)

He looks at Marie not quite believing she shared THAT bit of information. And all the time Marie is berating Cindy, he continues to look at Marie.

When she eventually feels his stare and glances his way, the words die in her throat.

Anger she'd expected and figured she could deal with... A simple heartfelt apology she was sure would take care of that. Betrayal would be harder, but she'd hoped that if he were feeling that her rant at Cindy would counteract it.

But when she made eye contact and he had a questioning look, one that then swept up and down her, she knew. Suddenly, he felt he no longer knew who - or maybe even what - she was.

As he gathered his things and packed his backpack up, ignoring whatever they were saying to *him*, he told Marie he'd let the teacher know they were no longer working on the same project together.

Then he looked at Cindy like he finally recognized trash and turned and left.

What can I say...? I really have issues where people buckle to blackmail that has more to do with embarrassment than criminal drawbacks...

The best I've ever read!

Fun and so good with many motivations in play. Can't wait for the next one!

This was awesome but i feel so bad for paul i would be so uncomfortable

Fan-fucking-tastic!

This has been a long time favorite of mine. I occasionally come back to read this one in particular, it's very detailed and hot. While I enjoy long stories with a ton of build up and explanation, this has that great in between of "looking for a quickie" and also "builds with a lot of hotness" -- wish there was a sequel.

As soon as he gets free he gut punches Cindy, preferring to just deck her and knock her out but not really wanting to break her jaw or eye socket, but really the only sure way to take down the damned wrestling team ninja. While she's trying to breathe he pins her face down and ties her hands behind her back, then strips her naked from the waist down, pins her legs up and hog ties her. He managed to do the same to her friend without any violence, his girlfriend was easiest still being passed out. He arranged them in a star pattern, all of their heads facing each other, so they could clearly see each other and what was about to happen to each other. A glass of water on his girlfriend to wake her up, then making the rounds to gag all of them.

He hasnt said a word the entire time. He leaves the room for a few minutes and comes back with a bottle of coconut cooking oil from the kitchen and sets it in the middle of the room, then sitting down next to it he grabs his backpack and pulls out a medicine bottle, shaking two pills out into his hand, picks up a bottle of water and drinks down the pills. "...figured I better take two viagra for a start, wouldn't want to get worn out in the middle of fucking your virgin asses! That wouldn't do! I'm going to work real hard not to cum in your asses though because after I finish breaking you three in I'm gonna take a nap then see about blowing a load in each of you and knocking you three up! That seems reasonable, right? Whats that? Oh, you agree! i thought so!" "...or maybe I should just be content with your asses and let the hockey team worry about knocking you up? Nah, I wouldnt do that. Though the guys on the wrestling team really would like to play with you Cindy. Thats ok, right? "

You've done us proud Paul, allways show a lady a good time. The girls have discovered a ill kept secret (except in Lit Stories) the second cumming always takes longer so you can to.

Did I say that was Hot, Hot, Hot. My second read, do the girls take advantage of their horniness again

I agree with Anonymous (the escape of Paul & Cindy & the wrestling team)!! Cindy needs her cum-upance! I can understand Maria's wanting to do him, but he doesn't belong to the other two. Wasn't something I'd read again.

Hi I don't know why it wasn't posted here, but the author of this wrote a good part of another one of these stories. Not a sequel, but a similar situation, only more epic and intense. Enjoy!

https://milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=16218

It happens all the time. My three sisters and I passed boyfriends from one to another in high school. Cousins got involved in the trades as well. And we all had friends that benefitted from our castoffs, as well. And currently my cousin and I are wearing out the same guy...another castoff. I take care of his sexual needs during the day; and little cousin has him at nights. And we have a truckdriver friend that we doubleteam. So, yes I can see Cindy and Marie both with our hero, Paul; and even Victoria gets in on it. Paul is such a lucky man. And the three girls are equally lucky.

If he comes back with eight friends .....?

Need more Cindy is definitely gonna want more now Paul owns her & needs to make her know it Victoria wants her turn too

THIS IS AWESOME.IT MADE ME CUM SO HARD

Certainly a cum fest - pure lust - and Victoria will get the next time for certain - feelings by all were so graphic - well written to a PLUS 5 - Hope you continue this story with so many possibilities!

Yes yes yes

Best story I read in years.. .

This Is Awesome Writing! Women and Men, Age Doesn't Matter; Think About Scenes Like This Very Often! We, the Readers, Need to See Victoria and Cindy and Maria Involved At Least Once More In Another Longgg Story! Thank You Very Much!

Phenomenal writing, really made me feel as if I was somewhere in the room, watching.

Made me feel as if I were watching. Very hot story line. Freaking amazing. Great job!

Due to reading thousands of Literotica stories, I expect a certain amount of stretch-your-imagination. But this one stretched me so far as to cut into my enjoyment.

1) One girl -- even two -- can hold helpless a guy who is portrayed as a.strapping hunk?

2) yeah, I realize Literotica heroes have sexual endurance beyond us ordinary mortals. But to be stimulated by hot girls, relentless machine, young, warm, tight pussies and then hold out against cumming that long -- thats more in the realm of SciFi.

3) so he's in a verboten pussy fucking forever and thats not cheating, simply determined by being able to hold out against orgasm. So if he fucks for 15 minutes without orgasm -- that is not cheating; but an already highly stimulated guy who lasted one minute -- that is cheating? Give me a break!

As I was reading, it did not occur to me as any of it was cheating; just part of the game in that special situation.

Toofar out for me to properly enjoy it.

Author obviously has language and storytelling skills.

Paul in Oklahoma

Now that's what I call erotic humor. They really should check Marie's pulse, though. Well written, Well done! I can't stop grinning.

TOO BAD NOBODY VIDEO TAPE THE ACTION FOR 6 HOURS OR LONGER!

1. One girl wouldn't be able to hold guy like this, and if she would be able, she would find him much less attractive (killing the mood...)

2. Getting up immidiately (skipping sensitive phase) adds a lot of stamina, he wouldn't have to hold back for a while.

3. Girl's orgasm torrents also unrealistic - they may need few (even close) climbs, possibly have up to few orgasm but not this (just breaks immersion of the story).

4. Also (in my experience) women don't seem to mind being watched or share a guy with their friends - it's quite oposite actually, so them swaping places (riding) few times would seem more natural.

Ps. Starting sex with Marie, also mistake. Threesome advice: your girl gets their's before seeing (and so enjoying, most women do ~ primal thing) other female does the guy - she may kill the mood (jelousy) afterwards...

That story definitely needs a follow up.

This needs a sequel! It's honestly my favorite Literotica read!

first story I've ever read on literotica that i feel doesn't deserve the 'hot' tag on it

Absolutely FANTASTIC

Oh well.

I am surprised this is a first effort.

I look forward to your new stories.

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