All Comments on 'Three Wishes'

by PrincessJezebel

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KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 11 years ago
Has everything but a Green Room! :+))

I suppose you could add a kind of Epilogue, for balance? Moral of the Story, perhaps?

Cute concept. He seemed rushed in the prologue; however,

in context, it was okay.

YOU are a Very Naughty Princess, Jezebel.

Where "on the plains" and/or do you get to Music City USA? :+))

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
Fun fantasy!

Well-written, fanciful, and almost-but-not-quite believable. I like it!

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