All Comments on 'Thrust'

Great story! You will love it! Gay or Straight it doesn't matter when you read something this hot and erotic!

This story was effective in as far it goes, but it doesn't provide much context for the action. Readers would become more involved in story if it didn't begin and end so abruptly. Allow readers to understand and to care about the characters.

Maybe it could have been longer. The story and detail were good but it ended entirely to soon.

Yummmmmm. Just like that...