All Comments on 'Tiffany's Timidities Ch. 02'

This could easily pass for a MC story, with the Doctors having put some kind of mind-whammy on Tiffany to make her pliable to their more humiliating instructions, but still embarrassed to follow them.

Not a deep story, but well put-together and eminently fappable, with good descriptive language and a nice mix of fetishes on offer.

The spelling and grammar are fine throughout. It's a subjective thing, but I found it a little awkward that for the final scene you stopped using Tiffany's name and relied entirely on the pronouns 'she' & 'her.'

cannot wait for the next installment :)

Please keep up the great work, thoroughly enjoying this story, cant weight for the next chapter, love the way you bring out the innocence and gullability of your ni-eve young victem's, you have a unique quality that I truly love

please write more soon

More more more please I'm begging!

Wow, I appreciate your comments and enthusiasm. Good news: I'm nearly done editing Ch. 3. I just want to rewrite the final scene because the first idea I had wasn't as good as I want it to be (nor as good as you all deserve). Should be able to submit it by the weekend, then figure a 5 day wait for approval. Sorry it takes me so long, but I self-edit and only get to write in my free time.

Thanks for commenting and reading my work. The idea that folks enjoy my stories makes it all worth it & fun!

I really love your story arc, dashed with humour and tease. It's like a breath of fresh air in this category. I also liked how you're taking the story one day at a time, and still have managed to hook me with the new and exciting acts.

5*! Keep writing!