All Comments on 'Time Differences Ch. 04'

Bored, bored bored. The writing is mediocre, the concept isn't moving the story, the characters are two-dimensional at best, the situation is oh-so-contrived, and the sex isn't even all that hot. And the dialog . . . have you ever read any authentic 19th century Victorian dialog? But even the "contemporary" bits sound forced and inartful.

I wonder where all the bad commoments come from? I enjoy the story very much so far, though I wonder what it will lead to.

But for now, I really like it and wait for more.